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Mosul (Haiku) by Dovina
Down on the desert, killer and lover mingle, remembering well. The dying killer loads on the hurting lover, an undeserved grief.

Up the ladder: Hanging Gallows
Down the ladder: Go Ahead

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4470
Posted: December 27, 2004 2:49 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2004 2:49 PM PST
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[n/a] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 29-Dec-04/7:17 PM | Reply
Could not someone say it's 5-7-5?
[9] jroday @ 204.215.33.30 > Dovina | 3-Jan-05/12:31 AM | Reply
It's better than a 5-7-5
[n/a] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 > jroday | 3-Jan-05/2:02 PM | Reply
Wow! I thought that was as good as it gets. Thanks
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