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Mosul (Haiku) by Dovina Down on the desert,
killer and lover mingle,
remembering well.
The dying killer
loads on the hurting lover,
an undeserved grief.
Up the ladder:
Is This My Country?
Down the ladder:
Deserted Shopping Carts
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Posted: December 27, 2004 2:49 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2004 2:49 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2086053 Overall Rank: 4512 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
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29-Dec-04/7:17 PM
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Could not someone say it's 5-7-5?
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jroday @ 204.215.33.30
> Dovina
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3-Jan-05/12:31 AM
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It's better than a 5-7-5
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
> jroday
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3-Jan-05/2:02 PM
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Wow! I thought that was as good as it gets. Thanks
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