poemranker ::Mosul by Dovina

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Haiku № 117371

Mosul

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Dec 2004 · 3 comments

Down on the desert, killer and lover mingle, remembering well. The dying killer loads on the hurting lover, an undeserved grief.

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4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

3 comments

[n/a] Dovina 29-Dec-04/7:17 PM Reply
Could not someone say it's 5-7-5?
[9] jroday › Dovina 3-Jan-05/12:31 AM Reply
It's better than a 5-7-5
[n/a] Dovina › jroday 3-Jan-05/2:02 PM Reply
Wow! I thought that was as good as it gets. Thanks