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Mosul (Haiku) by Dovina

Down on the desert, killer and lover mingle, remembering well. The dying killer loads on the hurting lover, an undeserved grief.

Dovina 29-Dec-04/7:17 PM
Could not someone say it's 5-7-5?




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