on Math Poem 2 by Dovina
25 Dec 2004, 6:35 PM
As my son says to me sometimes that's down -10- Felicia
on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
30 Dec 2004, 1:14 AM
I like this poem very much, your skills are getting better. I bless you with a -10-
on An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya
1 Jan 2005, 3:11 AM
When the sun rises my angel, I shall be there with thee
Never allowing thy soul to stray from me.Just a little
something from my next poem. I really like this poem,
keep up the good work -9-
Never allowing thy soul to stray from me.Just a little
something from my next poem. I really like this poem,
keep up the good work -9-
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina
1 Jan 2005, 1:13 AM
My students loves reading your math poems. I think Im going to let them write one for extra credit, since they keep asking me. Felicia
on Point Blank by jroday
2 Jan 2005, 4:58 AM
This is my first time trying to write a "Prose Poem"
on Poetic Profit by Dovina
4 Jan 2005, 2:36 PM
-10-
on Tough Act To Follow by jroday
8 Jan 2005, 5:03 AM
Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.
on Separation by Dovina
7 Feb 2005, 2:59 PM
"Ye can not drink the cup of the Lord, and the cup of devils: ye can not be partakers of the Lord's table, and of the devils."
A doubleminded man is unstable."
I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
A doubleminded man is unstable."
I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
on Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh
9 Feb 2005, 12:24 PM
Now that's reality!
on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
11 Feb 2005, 1:52 PM
Dovina the poem is very nice, the title explains what the poem is all about if you read it carefully.
on The Man I Love by Dovina
14 Feb 2005, 3:04 AM
No words come close, to what I see in you, but no words
can explain. None I can think of ever do.
Many words come to mind. As there's so much more. But no words can express. And no tongue can tell. Just what
I see in you, or how I feel as well.
Just putting a little icing on the cake, and good luck.
can explain. None I can think of ever do.
Many words come to mind. As there's so much more. But no words can express. And no tongue can tell. Just what
I see in you, or how I feel as well.
Just putting a little icing on the cake, and good luck.
on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 8:00 AM
Dovina love hard, and I wish you all the happiness in the world.
You don't have to explain nothing to no one.
What people think and say about you is none of your business.
You don't have to explain nothing to no one.
What people think and say about you is none of your business.
on A Sinnerâs Prayer by Dovina
17 Feb 2005, 3:31 PM
Hey! is it Ok for a brother to leave a comment?
I don't wanna leave no icing (smile)
I don't wanna leave no icing (smile)
on Summing Up by Dovina
19 Feb 2005, 3:21 AM
Love the poem, keep'em coming.
on Itâs the Management by Dovina
25 Feb 2005, 2:26 AM
Same damn thing happens here in Florida.When we get a hurricane warning, and they tell everyone to seek shelter.
Management will tell some of there workers if they don't come to work there fired, and you have some fools
that will try to go.
Management will tell some of there workers if they don't come to work there fired, and you have some fools
that will try to go.
on Advertising says: by Dovina
1 Mar 2005, 10:31 AM
It's a catch to it all,we all have been a sucker for Advertisement sometime in our life.
on The Symbol by Dovina
24 Mar 2005, 1:27 PM
I really feel you on this one D.
on A Righteous Prayer by Dovina
24 Jun 2005, 6:26 AM
I feel like she has thanked God for all his blessing,
and she is pleading with him not in prayer, but in faith.
All she is asking God is to keep her strong in her faith, because she does'nt want to go back to those evil ways.
and she is pleading with him not in prayer, but in faith.
All she is asking God is to keep her strong in her faith, because she does'nt want to go back to those evil ways.
When I had my second brain surery. I felt like some of the verses in this poem, that's why I wrote the poem can't fight no more -10-