on Math Poem 3 by Dovina
1 Jan 2005, 1:13 AM
My students loves reading your math poems. I think Im going to let them write one for extra credit, since they keep asking me. Felicia
replying on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
31 Dec 2004, 12:33 PM
No I dont think so. Perhaps I am getting to old to keep up with you young people at age fifty (smile)
replying on Possession by Acid_moose
31 Dec 2004, 12:21 PM
Seem to me you were a little depressed at the beginning of the poem,but you got yourself together.
Remember love with esteem cannot go far or reach high. It is an angel with only one wing. -9-
Remember love with esteem cannot go far or reach high. It is an angel with only one wing. -9-
replying on My Beliefs by jroday
31 Dec 2004, 6:47 AM
I was sitting here in rehab, and listing to the other patients talk about different things, and I decided to write this, whether
It was a poem or not. I tell my elder son blacksoul, you can focus on the obstacles, or you can go on and decide what your going to do about it. To me, it breaks down to that; you can do and not just be.
It was a poem or not. I tell my elder son blacksoul, you can focus on the obstacles, or you can go on and decide what your going to do about it. To me, it breaks down to that; you can do and not just be.
on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
30 Dec 2004, 1:14 AM
I like this poem very much, your skills are getting better. I bless you with a -10-
on Math Poem 2 by Dovina
25 Dec 2004, 6:35 PM
As my son says to me sometimes that's down -10- Felicia
on blacksoul/disable/reply by jroday
24 Dec 2004, 4:43 AM
Sorry Dovina about deleteing your comment. I've got to get use to that red x damn. But it's me Felicia.
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Dec 2004, 11:58 AM
To your comment on my brother poem is about our mother It wasn't meant to be taken that way. It was about our mother trying to raise six kids before she died.
My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov.
he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people
might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll
number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems
Felicia
My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov.
he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people
might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll
number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems
Felicia
on The Slave by Bhaskaryya
22 Dec 2004, 11:29 AM
I agree with Dovina. good poem work on it a little more
on Magnetic Time by Dovina
21 Dec 2004, 2:02 PM
Dovina I posted the poem he worte for you. this poem is wonderful that you wrote for him. the only thing is that he had a seizure today, and went into a coma. I will e-mail you. Felicia
replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
11 Nov 2004, 7:57 AM
You nerd! QUESTION: What's long and round and got a head on it?
replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
10 Nov 2004, 2:36 PM
richa i understand what you are saying, but what work for me to change my life around might not work for anyone else, but we all have our own beliefs in what works and dont works in life. i'm not downing edpeterson, but he never has anything to say or help
anyone if they have a flaw in there poems. he just makes fun of them and a lot of people on this site are trying very hard to become good poem writers including myself. sure your going to have people on this site that's going to have smart remark's,
but they still tell you what you need to do to improve.
anyone if they have a flaw in there poems. he just makes fun of them and a lot of people on this site are trying very hard to become good poem writers including myself. sure your going to have people on this site that's going to have smart remark's,
but they still tell you what you need to do to improve.
Never allowing thy soul to stray from me.Just a little
something from my next poem. I really like this poem,
keep up the good work -9-