| Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya |
1-Jan-05/3:11 AM |
When the sun rises my angel, I shall be there with thee
Never allowing thy soul to stray from me.Just a little
something from my next poem. I really like this poem,
keep up the good work -9-
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| Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina |
1-Jan-05/1:13 AM |
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My students loves reading your math poems. I think Im going to let them write one for extra credit, since they keep asking me. Felicia
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| Re: a comment on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya |
31-Dec-04/12:33 PM |
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No I dont think so. Perhaps I am getting to old to keep up with you young people at age fifty (smile)
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| Re: a comment on Possession by Acid_moose |
31-Dec-04/12:21 PM |
Seem to me you were a little depressed at the beginning of the poem,but you got yourself together.
Remember love with esteem cannot go far or reach high. It is an angel with only one wing. -9-
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| Re: a comment on My Beliefs by jroday |
31-Dec-04/6:47 AM |
I was sitting here in rehab, and listing to the other patients talk about different things, and I decided to write this, whether
It was a poem or not. I tell my elder son blacksoul, you can focus on the obstacles, or you can go on and decide what your going to do about it. To me, it breaks down to that; you can do and not just be.
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| Re: a comment on Tsunami by auscot |
30-Dec-04/1:17 AM |
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It is a good poem, makes you think about the people in Asia.
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| Re: Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya |
30-Dec-04/1:14 AM |
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I like this poem very much, your skills are getting better. I bless you with a -10-
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| Re: a comment on My Wife by Dovina |
30-Dec-04/12:59 AM |
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Yes I'm the real jroday,still in the hospital, but doing fine.
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
29-Dec-04/5:07 PM |
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This is a wonderful poem to me. It brings back a lot of memories.
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| Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
25-Dec-04/6:35 PM |
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As my son says to me sometimes that's down -10- Felicia
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| Re: blacksoul/disable/reply by jroday |
24-Dec-04/4:43 AM |
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Sorry Dovina about deleteing your comment. I've got to get use to that red x damn. But it's me Felicia.
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Dec-04/11:58 AM |
To your comment on my brother poem is about our mother It wasn't meant to be taken that way. It was about our mother trying to raise six kids before she died.
My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov.
he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people
might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll
number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems
Felicia
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| Re: a comment on Disable by blacksoul |
22-Dec-04/11:33 AM |
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Did'nt mean any harm to no one. my father is handicapped, he's in the hospital in a coma as I speak. again I am sorry.
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| Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya |
22-Dec-04/11:29 AM |
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I agree with Dovina. good poem work on it a little more
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| Re: a comment on Mallard by richa |
21-Dec-04/2:29 PM |
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Felicia you did'nt have to log in on me, but any Dovina go to www.leroy campbell.com and tell me what you think of my stick men. better yet my paintings.
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| Re: Magnetic Time by Dovina |
21-Dec-04/2:02 PM |
Dovina I posted the poem he worte for you. this poem is wonderful that you wrote for him. the only thing is that he had a seizure today, and went into a coma. I will e-mail you. Felicia
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| Re: Reality by blacksoul |
19-Dec-04/3:57 AM |
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This is not a Haiku. bro. before you start posting stuff. read up on the different kinds of poetry. love ya sis.
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| Re: Math Poem by Dovina |
19-Dec-04/3:47 AM |
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Dovina this is very good. I'm a high school math teacher. jrodays daughter Felicia
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| Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina |
11-Nov-04/7:57 AM |
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You nerd! QUESTION: What's long and round and got a head on it?
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| Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina |
10-Nov-04/2:36 PM |
richa i understand what you are saying, but what work for me to change my life around might not work for anyone else, but we all have our own beliefs in what works and dont works in life. i'm not downing edpeterson, but he never has anything to say or help
anyone if they have a flaw in there poems. he just makes fun of them and a lot of people on this site are trying very hard to become good poem writers including myself. sure your going to have people on this site that's going to have smart remark's,
but they still tell you what you need to do to improve.
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