Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina	10-Nov-04/7:54 AM
richa my aphorisms are not unsubstantiated. They are from what "I" and only "I" experienced in my life. I made alot of mistakes, and I learned from them. Yes I understand every aphorism I say, because I have exerienced each one. some good, some bad.And the offended reply. I use to be like that until my mother told me when you criticize someone, they become defensive. When you spell out there mistakes they listen.I know it works both ways.
Re: Leftout by RION12	10-Nov-04/2:29 AM
Everyone, regardless of how naturally optimistic he or she is, has to work at remaining positive.Also find the good. It's all around you. find it, showcase it,and you'll start believing in it.
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina	10-Nov-04/1:57 AM
Truth is more than a mental exercise.The next time you want to leave me a comment.Dont leave me a fucking dimtard comment if that's the best education you've got.Here's one for you to grow on.I HAVE FOUND THOUGHTS AND WORDS TO BE THE FOUNDATION FOR SUCCESS AND FAILURE IN LIFE.
Re: An Afternoon Walk by Dovina	9-Nov-04/5:04 PM
Dovina! others may deprive you of your material wealth and cheat you in a thousand ways, but no man can deprive you of the control and use of your imagination. That's why I say nothing in the world is more dangerous than sincere Ignorance and consciencious stupidity.I am sure that I'm going to get some kind of smart comment from someone, but understand! What people think of me isn't any of my business.And I would like for you to remember that my friend.
Re: a comment on Grandma's Prayer/Lord Reply by jroday	7-Nov-04/4:33 AM
Come on Eddie P. you already know.
Re: a comment on Grandma's Prayer/Lord Reply by jroday	6-Nov-04/9:24 AM
" Nothing in the world is more dangerous than sincere ingnorance and consciencious stupidity.going to church, and putting money in the basket does'nt get you in heaven.
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	6-Nov-04/12:41 AM
just apart of getting old.I had to smile on that one.
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	5-Nov-04/9:58 AM
thats true, I did'nt think about that at the time, you are so very right.
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	5-Nov-04/9:13 AM
small god, but you know the real God would'nt let that happen. anyway we are taught that fire burns. maybe one day the real God will show some of us how it feels when we are burning in HELL
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	5-Nov-04/3:44 AM
I'm not an old man yet, but growing older pains really hurts. thats why young people need to try to take good care of themselfs while they are young.because if they dont,it will come back to haunt them one day.
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	5-Nov-04/2:32 AM
D.A. you know one day, If we live that long we are going to get old. Don't put no bad mouth on me I'm almost a half century old.
Re: a comment on Grandma by Dovina	4-Nov-04/2:33 PM
It doesn't matter if there senses are sharpen are not. They are more wiser than we are(young people). You can't fault older people for young people with, say, childhood Arthritis. no man, woman or child know whats predestined for them. only one person knows that.And pain hurts i dont give a ---- how old you are.
Re: Grandma by Dovina	3-Nov-04/2:32 PM
Reminds me of my grandmother when she was living.It gets no better than this, keep up the good work.
Re: a comment on Trust by Dovina	31-Oct-04/4:18 AM
Dovina you know this poem can work both ways. instead of his it could be her, and what i mean by that is my first wife reminds me of this poem. I tried so hard to make our marriage work, but I just kept on catching her in lies. she would say I'm going one place and end up in another.We had three children, she did'nt give a damn. all she wanted to do was hit the streets with her boyfriend. I still loved her no matter what she did, because i had hope that she would stop, and we could raise our family, but it did'nt happen. i divorce her.I was young and dumb but as time went on I became him in this poem because i said to myself i wont be hurt by no one no more, but my illness change all of that, and i remember what my grandfather use to tell me. all men have faults. small men are blind to thier own, and therefore remain small.
Re: a comment on Ending by Dovina	31-Oct-04/3:13 AM
There's nothing like the beauty of memories. I imagine this place was beautiful. out in the country, and going back brought back memories, and you became depressed. you thought about the good and the bad times. sometimes going back home gives you peace of mine and motivation. because memories or like true love, it's always in your heart.
Re: Ending by Dovina	29-Oct-04/4:16 AM
Very well written -10-
Re: A Better God by Dovina	23-Oct-04/3:03 PM
To sum it up "I existed from all eternity and, behold, iam here; and i shall exist till the end of time, for my being has no end.
Re: A Better God by Dovina	23-Oct-04/8:26 AM
I love your poems. keep up the good work, and remember Whatever is in anyway beautiful has its source of beauity in itself. and complete in itself; praise forms no parts of it. so it is none the worse nor the better for being praised. when you create this planet let me know.
Re: GODDESS by jroday	21-Oct-04/2:38 PM
I'm sorry Mrs dovina for deleteing your comments. i should have not been on my grandads computer anyway. you know he is in the hospital
Re: The Mortician: Scourge of the pen. by SupremeDreamer	10-Oct-04/7:04 AM
I ENJOYED READING THIS VERY MUCH -10-