Re: Versions by Dovina	9-Oct-04/3:51 AM
I like the concept of it.
Re: a comment on One True Instant by Dovina	9-Oct-04/3:43 AM
I did'nt know if he was a stranger or really your husband. I knew you were only talking about one. thats what got me. you can just call me william and tea will be served at 5:00pm malady (SMILE)
Re: One True Instant by Dovina	7-Oct-04/4:15 AM
you got me on this one
Re: Black Woman by jroday	7-Oct-04/4:10 AM
I did'nt mean to delete your comments I really did'nt you can call me an ass hole on this one I'm not a woman I'm a man and again i apologize to both of you DARK A. and DOVINA
Re: Black Woman by jroday	6-Oct-04/11:02 AM
Dovina this poem is about one woman not a race and how she feels about herself and how faith gave her the courage to face the uncertainties of the future
Re: Black Woman by jroday	6-Oct-04/10:42 AM
D.A. I know how you feel. but sometimes it's better to be friends friendships or almost like relationships
Re: No One But You by TLRufener	6-Oct-04/2:55 AM
I like this!
Re: THE GAME by jroday	19-Sep-04/5:06 AM
THIS IS NOT A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTENT. THIS IS A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTETEST.
Re: a comment on LOVE AFFAIR by jroday	16-Sep-04/12:56 AM
I dont know about the chevy van and shit, but 1974 was right on time that was the year I finish high school and all this shit jumped off
Re: Black Love by Faulk	15-Sep-04/2:15 PM
I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL @#%$#@##$$$#@#$%^&*(#$%^&*#$%^&&% AND SOME
Re: a comment on Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	13-Aug-04/5:51 AM
Yes cat there is a different between black people and niggers. webster dictionary 1962 edition said that a nigger was a black man from africa, I was born in the U.S.A.(smile). now in today's edition it says that a nigger is a nasty person with an atitude, so that could be anyone.(you wont find nigger in all webster's dictionarys, but if you research enough you'll fine it.)no iam not asking people to look at whites as individuals and assume black people think a certain way.everyone one is his or her own individual, and everyone think a certain way. It has nothing to do with the color of your skin.you must have misunderstood me when i said, the question is not always where we stand, but in which direction we are headed.what i meant by that is human beings by changing the inner attitudes of their minds, can change the outer aspects of their lives. if you can change your inner attitude you should be able to cope with anything.
Re: a comment on Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	12-Aug-04/5:59 AM
you know you are so very right.all i ask s.dreamer was one simply question and he gave me that answer. the rest of the comment he could have left out.but that's in the past. now getting back to your comment. i agree! but you know nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. i hope one day some black people wont be so touchy on the past the question is not always where we stand, but in which direction we are headed.
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	11-Aug-04/3:34 PM
HA, HA, HA, HA,SON PEOPLE GROW THROUGH EXPERIENCE IF THEY MEET LIFE HONESTLY AND COURAGEOUSLY. THIS IS HOW CHARACTER IS BUILT.I have always learned from EXPERIENCE THAT THE GREATER PART OF OUR HAPPINESS OR MISERY DEPENDS UPON OUR DISPOSITIONS, AND NOT UPON OUR CIRCUMSTANCES.I'AM HAVING A GOOD TIME PLAYING WITH YOU ON THIS MATTER, BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT TO SERIOUS.SO I'AM GOING TO LEAVE IT ALONG, BUT i hav'nt been a negro since back in the 70's (smile)
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	11-Aug-04/12:17 PM
Let me tell you something bubba, you will never know how a person will feel about anything they read. i dont give a damn what kind of comments you make or what you call a person.so wipe the milk from around your mouth,and grow the fuck up and be a man.and what i mean by that is instead of calling me a embrowned asshat or i will be shitpie'd oneday or another. just call me a nigger and get it over with. i'd rather for a man to say what he really feels than to play teenage games with me,see in my life time i've been called nigger,colored,afro-american,coon,boy. and now i'm black. like i told you before i like the damn lyric. but you just took shit the wrong way.you aint nothing but a niggling i know you dont know what it mean. so i'm going to tell you. it means trifling,piddling,inconsequential,measly,picayune.its educated black people in the south with master degrees that our forefathers fought and died for so that we could have a better future in your lyric you talk about pride. in black history we talk about how to survive. BLACK HISTORY 101 THE END
Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby	11-Aug-04/6:45 AM
SELF-RESPECT-WHERE TALENT IS A DWARF, SELF-ESTEEM IS A GIANT HANG IN THERE MR BLOBBY!
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	11-Aug-04/6:26 AM
I'm a blackman that bullshit comment you wrote dont mean a damn thing for what i ask you. I did'nt mean a thing for asking what is the concept of your lyric? and you want to stereotype me. you need to stop taking some of your work so personally. I like the damn lyric. born,raised. great great grandfather hung in mississippi during those times. and people dont like to talk about it.you say a blackman is singing it.his ass wont be from mississippi.but anyway S.D.you just jump all over me like i wanted to hang you like some nigger on a mississippi tree.get your shit together you help me alot when i join poemranker on my writing. those three zero's you got did'nt come from me.i live in florida. they might have come from mississippi.i bless you with a 9
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-04/5:06 AM
What is the concept behind this poem? before i make any comment.
Re: a comment on PATIENCE by jroday	18-May-04/3:00 PM
SupremeDreamer I would like for you to read all my poems and tell me what you think. I like your style It's up front and no bullshit I like a honest person, and being an amateur I need honesty.
Re: a comment on PATIENCE by jroday	18-May-04/2:49 PM
Dark_Angel In our complete darkness we are all the same,It is only our knowledge and wisdom that separate us. dont let your eyes decieve you.
Re: a comment on I MISS YOU by jroday	18-May-04/2:36 PM
Thank you all my friends I will take your advice. I do need more experience in writing poems.