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LOVE AFFAIR (Lyric) by jroday
The time has come for us to part. there's no more love with in my heart. I tried to get you to explain, you just laugh with realizing my pain.The things you said cut so deep it hurt from my head to my feet. For better or worse through thick and thin. never thought this love affair would end. There was nothing I would'nt do for your touch. never dreamed I'd loved one woman so much (CHROUS) Tried of giving the feelings you never share. Tried of living this fantasy love affair. Through I'm leaving dont you cry, I'm the one grieveing you know why. You thought you were in the know, always on the go. what is it you're trying to hide? the fact you no longer need me by your side.DAMN!while I'm hard at work you're out doing you're dirt. I was totally blind and in the dark. till i saw you kissing and hugging him in the park. (CHROUS) Tried of giving the feelings you never share. Tried of living this fantasy love affair. Through I'm leaving dont you cry, I'm the one grieveing you know why.

Up the ladder: My Resuscitating Love
Down the ladder: Stayed Too Long

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4076
Posted: September 15, 2004 2:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2004 2:02 PM PDT
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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 15-Sep-04/4:30 PM | Reply
A 1974, Chevy van, with a hot pink narwhale leaping out of the artic ocean; Saddled and ridden by a loose mermaid -- airbrushed on its side.
[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.33.80 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 16-Sep-04/12:56 AM | Reply
I dont know about the chevy van and shit, but 1974 was right on time that was the year I finish high school and all this shit jumped off
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