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Black Love (Lyric) by Faulk
Tomorrow brings another day but i know I will still feel this way my soul is black my heart is dead I am so angered by what you said "it is not you, I just need some space" well fuck you then, I hate your face I hate your voice, your hair, your eyes everything about you i despise yet I can not help from loving you you put my heart in a cage and tightened the last screw I hope you're glad with what you've done you've killed my world, and blocked out my sun there's still one more thing i need to say go to hell bitch--you're going to pay

Up the ladder: Goodbye
Down the ladder: Resume

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5317
Posted: September 7, 2004 8:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2004 8:37 PM PDT
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[5] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 7-Sep-04/8:58 PM | Reply
As ethnic as a turban at a cab stand.
[10] jroday @ 204.215.33.246 | 15-Sep-04/2:15 PM | Reply
I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL @#%$#@##$$$#@#$%^&*(#$%^&*#$%^&&% AND SOME
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