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Free verse № 108686

Walking in a field

by donmiguel1960

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Jul 2004 · 4 comments

Leaves fall early Children close by shedding tears of pain Walking in a field A relative dying A spouse fighting falling to the sane Walking in a field Young couples struggle Daughters laugh as fathers cry Walking in a field Comfort found Love deeply embraced as Happiness is gained Walking in a field

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[10] zodiac 19-Jul-04/3:10 AM Reply
Life must seem incredibly big and exciting to you. Does it?
[n/a] donmiguel1960 › zodiac 19-Jul-04/9:55 PM Reply
I think so, I mean, I like it. Sometimes the problem is that I feel to much. I write to try and cope.
[6] Dovina 19-Jul-04/11:32 AM Reply
It's a funeral in verses 1 and 2. But when daughters laugh, I wonder. Verse 4 doesn't seem to follow.
[n/a] donmiguel1960 › Dovina 19-Jul-04/9:56 PM Reply
the poem is about lifes trials. not a funeral, just the daily struggel.