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Walking in a field (Free verse) by donmiguel1960

Leaves fall early Children close by shedding tears of pain Walking in a field A relative dying A spouse fighting falling to the sane Walking in a field Young couples struggle Daughters laugh as fathers cry Walking in a field Comfort found Love deeply embraced as Happiness is gained Walking in a field

Dovina 19-Jul-04/11:32 AM
It's a funeral in verses 1 and 2. But when daughters laugh, I wonder. Verse 4 doesn't seem to follow.




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