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Black Woman (Free verse) by jroday
Dark am I, yet lovely,dark like the stallion and panther, oh what majestic creatures indeed! I am the color of coal which beautiful diamonds are formed. I am timeless forever was, forever will be. Eyes with the reflection of stars, shining in the mist of night. Strong and proud to withstand the burdens of time. I AM A WOMAN!

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5011
Posted: October 6, 2004 3:19 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2004 3:19 AM PDT
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[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.33.231 | 6-Oct-04/10:42 AM | Reply
D.A. I know how you feel. but sometimes it's better to
be friends friendships or almost like relationships
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.154.163.133 > jroday | 7-Oct-04/8:20 AM | Reply
I know what you mean. Some relationships make me feel trapped: http://tinyurl.com/4nw76
[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.33.231 | 6-Oct-04/11:02 AM | Reply
Dovina this poem is about one woman not a race and how she feels about herself and how faith gave her the courage to face the uncertainties of the future
[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.33.241 | 7-Oct-04/4:10 AM | Reply
I did'nt mean to delete your comments I really did'nt
you can call me an ass hole on this one I'm not a woman
I'm a man and again i apologize to both of you DARK A.
and DOVINA
[5] Dovina @ 204.250.12.246 > jroday | 7-Oct-04/5:50 AM | Reply
Appology accepted.
[10] Dreammaker1024 @ 67.149.74.86 | 11-Mar-05/9:25 PM | Reply
I like it.. I have a similar poem. I like how u portray the black woman, we are "Majestic creatures Indeed".
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