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Savor Your Tasteful, Tasteless Morsel (Free verse) by nothingtoanyone
My mind a muse
Busily playing at the strings of my hearts true feelings.
Douche be with me
Love be gone,
and pain be waiting at the end of my arm bearers nock.
Lock him and keep him
Lying,
Lying there in my pain
Now his.
Now his,
Now his
I may look on and grin,
not visually scared by my past.
Never to be broken
Never to be taken as a token
made to fit in a fools pocket.
Ark not so for my fingers lay still
No music pours out of my mouth
only a stiffened tongue,
still,
failing to taste.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5029
Posted: May 1, 2005 5:50 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2005 5:50 PM PDT
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