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For those of you (Free verse) by sk8rs_rule_all
You made me strong, you make me weak. You brought me to my knees, you made me shiver. Your smile brought one to my lips, Your eyes brought tears to mine. Everything about you is bitter sweet, everything you say, I cant help wonder if its a lie. I'd love to trust you, I'd love to hate you. This mystery of mine is unexplainable, like other mysteries. I opened my heart to you, I was hurt I hurt you. I'd love to say I didn't feel a thing, but then I'd be lying to myself and to you. You took me away to a wonderland unlike any other. You showed me things that were beautiful in every way. I loved you, and you loved me. It hurt us both, forcing us to seperate. Love is a tough game, made only for the strong. Hearts are shattered like glass, and tears come flowing like rivers. I wish I could drown you in my tears, I wish I could show you the pain you caused me, You wish I could see the pain I caused you. I cried myself to sleep some nights. We both put on shows, fronts, fake faces... Faking we're fine, faking we're ok. You were my everything, you were my only one. Time changes people. Unfortunately time changes me all too fast. Without your kiss, without your touch I was nothing. I could live no more when you were gone. I have found a loophole through that, like many other things in life. I have learned not to open my heart too soon, I have learned that it'll be ok, things will resume orbit once I let them, things will only continue if I let them. Take these words and read them well. Take these words and use them right. I hated to hurt you, You hated to hurt me. Things will pass with time, things will be fine. Let the pieces fall where they may.

Down the ladder: The Sipping of the Light

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5026
Posted: March 28, 2005 6:25 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2005 6:25 AM PST
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[5] poodietat @ 68.51.106.137 | 29-Mar-05/9:01 PM | Reply
This would be twice as good if it were half as long. There's not _that_ much here.
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