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Leftout (Free verse) by RION12
Why do I always feel leftout? No one likes who I really am. I always feel like I want to die. I don't know why I feel this way. I feel so leftout. I feel so unperfect. I don't know why you want me. I'm just unwanted.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8447
Posted: November 9, 2004 8:24 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2004 8:24 PM PST
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[6] jroday @ 204.215.33.169 | 10-Nov-04/2:29 AM | Reply
Everyone, regardless of how naturally optimistic he or she is, has to work at remaining positive.Also find the
good. It's all around you. find it, showcase it,and you'll start believing in it.
[n/a] RION12 @ 64.136.26.226 > jroday | 13-Nov-04/2:56 PM | Reply
Thank jroday! I never thought of it like that. I will think of what you said when I'm down and sad. Thanks again.
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.60.123 | 10-Nov-04/6:08 AM | Reply
"i'm a creep
and i'm a weirdo
what the hell am i doing here?
I don't belong here"


interesting the way you write "leftout" as one word.
radiohead circa 1990 something

unperfect. strangely, i think this may be better than imperfect.

you are just unwanted
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