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twelve years of public school in one dream (Free verse) by calliope
kindergarten classrooms used by night as college dorm rooms. smoking lounges, smokey-smelling crayon drawings on the wall. run to school and run right back, race the bus i never rode it anyway. disposable cameras, disposable friends, trash on the floor, desks used as ashtrays. the room is surrounded by yellowing plastic toys. and stuffed in dirty party cups: book reports and cigarette butts.

Up the ladder: O Death
Down the ladder: A scarce flower~

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8484
Posted: October 16, 2003 12:55 AM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2003 12:55 AM PDT
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Oct-03/4:06 PM | Reply
WEll, so you don't like cigarettes? poopy doppy do.
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