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Leftout (Free verse) by RION12

Why do I always feel leftout? No one likes who I really am. I always feel like I want to die. I don't know why I feel this way. I feel so leftout. I feel so unperfect. I don't know why you want me. I'm just unwanted.

edpeterson 10-Nov-04/6:08 AM
"i'm a creep
and i'm a weirdo
what the hell am i doing here?
I don't belong here"


interesting the way you write "leftout" as one word.
radiohead circa 1990 something

unperfect. strangely, i think this may be better than imperfect.

you are just unwanted




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