Damien
replying on Utensils of creation by Damien
18 Apr 2005, 2:14 AM
"I don't understand what this point's saying. Do you mean that you've almost graduated high school? I got a 1580 on the SAT; what did you get?"
Wow you really have got the intention to save the world!!!!!!
Nice try, failed misserably (sorry for spelling mistakes)
Thankyou for your usefull insight, I hope it wil help me grow within poetry, in fact I thank all you people who had the effort to comment.
Shutup Goad you fu*kin idiot
Very good, glad you can find the best in people
Thanks.
"So what is this thrumming coin on the strand?" is very nice.
Your mo*nface is huge, white and round.
Q: What do you mean you can "be more flexible without it"?
A: You're cr*p at grammar, so you've invented a reason why it's ok to be cr*p.
You can only be "more flexible" without grammar if you ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT THE F*CK YOU ARE DOING.
If you were to take up fishing, you'd feel you could be "more flexible without the pole".
Ironically the pole is the most flexible thing in fishing, aside from your limp cock which hasn't been fully deployed since Grandma bit a chunk off during a rather rowdy episode of "Countdown."
Glorious
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me).
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
I've often been mildly curious as to what NASDAQ means, but not nearly enough so that I bothered to find out. Ah, the power of acronyms.
Also, I feel a need to express my rage at the uselessness of this disk, upon whose digital memory I inscribed my latest masterpieces, and whose incompatibility with my computer was almost predictible enough to be amusing. Almost.
Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
Isn't NASDAQ high enough?! lol!!!
I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass.
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
Does Birmingham AL. actually get a "winter"? i think not. I said it was EARLY. clean your glasses.
A perfectly laid trap, neatly snaring the obvious prey. In 9 minutes, lolololol. I doff my fez & scratch my bald spot to you sir.
and what of mock indignation? Is your mock indignation trivial in comparison to that which has gone before or can you rightly be termed a mock indignator.