Damien
on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
21 Apr 2005, 6:54 AM
Feels like something I would of wrote. I trulty feel the meaning, if only these other "critiques" could see that.
Cheers Goad. Too young, I dont understand "extended double entrendre".
Thanks for the time.
This poem is brilliant. Of course, you need to have read http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
The thing did not load right and I'm not about to change a bunch of settings to make it work.
well, although my physical appearance is a little below average, moron is unfortunately completely incorrect. I did win that genetic lottery, somewhat, though I have frivolously pissed away that blessing over the years. In fact, I took an iq test last year in which I totally bombed and scored only 139. It's a good thing I never got around to joining Mensa or I would now have to suffer the embarassment of having my ass kicked out.
Woah...imagine my colossal surprise to discover the butt of the joke doesn't find the joke funny.
And you are correct, actually. In terms of physical appearance, I was definitely not a winner of any genetic lottery. How interesting to discover your primary way of judging people is how pretty their face is. I'd never have guessed that either, from the web page where you scale the picture of yourself to make you look skinny (though oddly rubbery, to be honest, sort of like the stretchy girl in the incredibles when she is stretching. Is that look in style now?)
Dovina and zodiac: -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. has discovered a wonderful online test, developed by Negro Experts at Harvard, which calculates how racist you are. I suggest you both take it, and present the results to the rest of the group.
"[My] data suggest a slight automatic preference for White People relative to Black People"
https://implicit.harvard.edu/implicit/uk
Excellent. The numbered verses might have seemed pretentious on a lesser work, but you pull it off. Quite excellent. 10.
Ranger
on Reflections on the current U.K. general election campaign by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
21 Apr 2005, 1:50 AM
predictably enough this has been voted on...
Actually the name Goad seems quite appropriate given the outraged replies to his comments
Tis but a place for gentlemen, where cads and bounders abound not. I believe this place would be owned by Dark Angel.
Ha! Yes please guvn'or!
Thanks Ellasona, love ya attitude. Are NY clubs dangerous?
Mostly the "-ation" so often (which I think someone's already commented on).
I also appreciated the fact that you had the presence of mind to let people know this is a 'pimple', yet so many others slate it as though you'd been trying to write Byron. That made me chuckle.
I'me glad my existence is funny to you.
it's about aids.
Intriguing. Menthol shampoo or one of those wire devices?
Different. It bears the repetition well, but starts to founder. I'd cut verse 3. "House with no start" seems nonsencicle, or stretched at best.