Goad
replying on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
22 Apr 2005, 4:14 AM
"... so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief..."
lol. yes, it's sad isn't it? the time I spend proselytizing myself. But very astute of you to notice. This is precisely why I have multiple users on 'ranker: each represents a disjoint set of beliefs, and they waste huge amounts of time trying to convert each other to their view points. It's like Sybil, but without the satanic cults. Probably because at some deep level I just find the whole idea of satanic cults fundamentally silly.
As far as stats: I don't care a whit about your stats. If you knew me, or even if you bothered to become vaguely familiar with my posting history before jumping into an exchange and making an idiot of yourself, you would realize my comment was entirely self-deprecatory. Ok, well, predominantly. Mostly. If not mostly, at least somewhat.
As to my being sanctimonious...well...as much I love the sound of the word, unfortunately I think I swear & curse a bit too much to qualify for it as an appellative :( You can call me "fucking sanctimonious bastard" if you like though -- that would, if delivered in a properly sarcastic tone, be more accurate.
Then why don't you write them down?
Really good stuff. I like the 'why chromosomes' pun. This short and sharp. Top marks, my friend.
Its a metephor for somwthing being over something else.
"his thoughts towered my thoughts"
"that building towers the landscape?"
Is that satisfactory.
A touch repetive, but I easily connected with this.
Aw! But good sir, let us not forget the minstrel whom has fought for his crown, Horus8.
fevriere
replying on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
22 Apr 2005, 1:33 AM
Thanks. I am surprised though because I'm not sure how much that line means.
fevriere
replying on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
22 Apr 2005, 1:32 AM
Ta.
fevriere
replying on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
22 Apr 2005, 1:32 AM
That too.
funny how you are so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief that I need to alter my appearance..... though my comment referance was to your internal ugliness. To see beyond the surface is one of my abilities, yet one of your inabilities.As far as my intellect, my stats are just fine though I feel no need to brag with numbers.... yet another thing I leave to the unfortunately less esteemed... I write to connect with others and share views... and I feel no reason to bash anyone in the manner which you do. .....For a loser that is so envious of me it cracks me up that you took the time to look up my website....and view only my pictures!
The sanctimonious live hollow lives!
i thought love was just sausages.
kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.
I must assume that the misspellings are intentional? and the misplaced apostrophes?
the final stanza (paragraph) is unwieldy, and the metaphor a bit cute, but I think it works okay, and the interior images (if that makes any fucking sense) are really good.
look up: Fighting erosion- it fits the conversation.
I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
There! Are you two goons happy? The closer was a bit long, wunnit.
At first I thought all the spelling and grammar irregularities were on purpose. Now I think you know no better.
There is no "wrong."