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Forbidden (Free verse) by Caducus
Weeping she whispered ‘I don’t want to go’ constricting me like a widows throat. ‘No one will love me as you do’ ‘Why can’t anyone see it’? from that moment I learned her fears yet couldn’t free it. We made love for centuries Kissing her body of bark Counting twenty ancient rings Carving into her flesh A grave of destiny Her mother grieves for. Our shadows lay as plinths; In a room where hands lay limp time caresses numerals With hands which strangled love, timeless; Stopping forever at twenty thirty two.

Down the ladder: Hindsight

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5023
Posted: April 12, 2005 7:36 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2005 6:51 AM PDT
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[n/a] A. Nomaly @ 61.91.36.254 | 21-Apr-05/10:18 PM | Reply
I guess I've gone cynical but these (this one and the seashore one) make me wanna throw up. Keep up the good work.
KC
[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 26-May-05/8:33 AM | Reply
If you're using punctuation, why not in widow's?
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