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http://mulberryfairy on Prayer For The Church by sliver 28 Apr 2005, 8:27 PM

What's outrageous? Papal praise is What's disgusting? Condom bustin' What's outrageous? Celebate priests is What's forbidden? alter boy smitten What do we want? Condoms! When do we want 'em? Now!

sliver on Returning by Dovina 28 Apr 2005, 8:12 PM

If only more of us would open the doors of our minds. I enjoyed the first stanza very much.The rest wasn't bad, ...

http://mulberryfairy on Lost key for a hall-closet by zodiac 28 Apr 2005, 8:09 PM

Loved this part "Then she's tucked, like laundry wearing rumpled laundry, in the old crotchless, scallops..." I got the sexual undertone, though not the way you intended it; I was thinking the key was a metaphor for some masturbation tool at the end.

http://mulberryfairy on L'Ãtoile by Shardik 28 Apr 2005, 8:04 PM

yes quite

sliver replying on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy 28 Apr 2005, 8:03 PM

Sometimes it's forced upon you.

sliver on The Resilient Woman by Joe-joe 28 Apr 2005, 8:02 PM

What is a ship? Alex

http://mulberryfairy on Fingers Are Soldiers by somemorepoetry 28 Apr 2005, 7:59 PM

fine writing

sliver on Hanging Gallows by Hadasl 28 Apr 2005, 7:57 PM

What does Zodiac know? I like it.

http://mulberryfairy replying on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy 28 Apr 2005, 7:56 PM

I don't take sides.

sliver on The promise by thepinkbunnyofdoom 28 Apr 2005, 7:54 PM

The first stanza reminds me of my friend Skip, "Stay out of my mind, there's things in there i don't want you to know." Good visuals.

sliver on FREAKIN by celticskatermatt1 28 Apr 2005, 7:52 PM

Only because you misspelled cello

sliver on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy 28 Apr 2005, 7:50 PM

And with that he's gone. Now you're changing sides?

http://mulberryfairy on In the aspens by sliver 28 Apr 2005, 7:47 PM

nice. I like "We unwittingly spit on the history Of souls stained like ours"

http://mulberryfairy on FREAKIN by celticskatermatt1 28 Apr 2005, 7:39 PM

marshmallows when spelled correctly can still rhyme with cellos

nentwined replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 2:40 PM

Your rendition of this continues to haunt me.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Iterated Fuck by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 2:39 PM

I just want to reiterate my total, total horror at this poeme. I've seen so many unbelievably sick things on the internet that I don't understand how I can feel so morally violated by what is, when you get down to it, a description of ordinary, unkinky, consensual sex between consenting adults. I think it's because I keep imagining Rockmage peeping out from a closet to watch, his beard all a-quiver. -10-

sliver replying on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:26 PM

It would work alot better if you could roll your word endings down, if you know what I mean. It would show how your thoughts have a tendency to droop at times.

nentwined replying on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:23 PM

Cool. =) Thanks.

sliver replying on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:23 PM

It does get the point acrost better now tho'. Some times it's like that.

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