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FREAKIN (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
jumping over the fire
my legs got burnt
oh my god what a day
i think i freakin lost my way.
what the hell is wrong with me?
i cant even pick up marshmellows
hey! you can even play some chellos
this poem might suck
but end the the poem gets stuck in your head
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12005
Posted: April 28, 2005 7:07 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2005 7:07 PM PDT
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when spelled correctly
can still rhyme with cellos