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FREAKIN (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
jumping over the fire my legs got burnt oh my god what a day i think i freakin lost my way. what the hell is wrong with me? i cant even pick up marshmellows hey! you can even play some chellos this poem might suck but end the the poem gets stuck in your head

Up the ladder: bimby
Down the ladder: Dinner With The Navy

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12009
Posted: April 28, 2005 7:07 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2005 7:07 PM PDT
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[n/a] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.165.7 | 28-Apr-05/7:39 PM | Reply
marshmallows
when spelled correctly
can still rhyme with cellos
[5] sliver @ 207.200.116.130 | 28-Apr-05/7:52 PM | Reply
Only because you misspelled cello
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