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zodiac on Waiting to be Consumed by Alizarin_Crimson 10 May 2005, 3:19 AM
This was good, right up to "She is a blander confection".
zodiac on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee 10 May 2005, 3:17 AM
This poem is remarkably like My Life in the MidEast, 2005.
jessicazee on Dying breed by INTRANSIT 10 May 2005, 12:55 AM
I want shorter lines, a hyphenated "broken eared," love "docking ballets." Didn't quite get the jist, unfortunately. Give me some more meat. 8.4
jessicazee on Finding Gin and Santa by richa 10 May 2005, 12:52 AM
I read this out loud to myself. I'm lovin' it.
jessicazee on Spirit In a Temple by peaceseeker 10 May 2005, 12:45 AM
I like the way your words resonate, but, okay, really, I am totally confused. It seems so personal...so much so that most readers can't/won't be able to relate. Maybe the point? Liked it anyway. 8.2
some deleted user on Waiting to be Consumed by Alizarin_Crimson 9 May 2005, 8:23 PM
This is fun, but also a bit nauseating. The last four lines are very nice. The first one is a bit confusing because all of a sudden SHE appears to be a desert as well... '
some deleted user on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 8:09 PM
No, this is not exellente. The problem with Memorials like this one, is that it only moves the author and acquaintances of this teacher. Outsiders who read this don't give a damn. And that's what the poem should do: make people who don't know anything about this man and his (presumely untimely) death, CARE. I wonder; what made him so very 'around'? What made him so unforgettable? What's his 'wonderful legacy'? There is not a thing you shed light on, all you present here is a list of facts, a bunch of platitudes. It's totally devoid of a personal view, it does not give an image of this man, except the impression that he must have come close to being the next Jesus. You sob and cry, Princess, and you don't tell me why.
some deleted user on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9 May 2005, 7:35 PM
'From having gay sex with a man'. All my life I've been asking men: "Am I having gay sex with you, or hetero sex?" By the way; does Nature still fabricate amoebae like Blindproject217? Gasp.
Hallmark on For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch 9 May 2005, 6:20 PM
Thanks, this is spiritually moving!
Hallmark on Strings by Fayt 9 May 2005, 5:52 PM
Is this an attack on religion?
Hallmark on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 5:47 PM
Excellente!
Hallmark replying on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 5:40 PM
They're old enough when they leave school, and they leave school at 3:30.
Hallmark replying on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 5:39 PM
16 is old enough for coffee isn't it?
Hallmark on Mistaken by midnight 9 May 2005, 5:33 PM
Poo also!
Hallmark on The Magician by Hooman 9 May 2005, 5:32 PM
Poo!
Hallmark on Afraid by LovePoet 9 May 2005, 5:30 PM
Brilliant! Smell my fear
Hallmark on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9 May 2005, 5:21 PM
Tut
mendoju on For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch 9 May 2005, 4:00 PM
Oh My God, this was beautiful - you're quite the writer Enoch2. Mendoju (Joey's sister)
mendoju on Four Seasons by mystic enoch 9 May 2005, 3:33 PM
Hi Enoch2, I thought your poem was wonderful, it took me back to my childhood! I'm gonna print it and have my brother Joey read it - I'm sure he'll enjoy your beautiful words. Bye...Judy
mystic enoch on Fate by Fayt 9 May 2005, 12:07 PM
It controls your actions in everyway.