poemranker ::Four Seasons by mystic enoch

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Free verse № 124048

Four Seasons

Member since 2005 · Posted 25 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

In the spring I was young I climbed mountains, Jumped across rivers, Swung in the jungle. I got my share of battle scars. In the summer the sun shown so bright. Everything looked good and was good. I tested the water and i jumped in. In the fall I had to dress appropriate Summer was over I had important things to do. I had my toys expensive babydolls They did everything. I had to love and care for them. I met my match before i conceived this. We were one. In the winter, it is so cold. I had to wear a coat to keep me warm. I didnt have my babydolls anymore. I was so tired. I took long naps and one day I woke up. enoch2

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[9] mendoju 9-May-05/3:33 PM Reply
Hi Enoch2, I thought your poem was wonderful, it took me back to my childhood! I'm gonna print it and have my brother Joey read it - I'm sure he'll enjoy your beautiful words. Bye...Judy
[8] Ranger 7-Mar-06/3:09 PM Reply
Heh, quite nice - although I think you meant 'shone' (line 6). I do like the last two lines, they made me smile. An 8 should undo some of the damage caused by rockmage's (rather impressive) zeroing marathon.