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Four Seasons (Free verse) by mystic enoch
In the spring I was young I climbed mountains, Jumped across rivers, Swung in the jungle. I got my share of battle scars. In the summer the sun shown so bright. Everything looked good and was good. I tested the water and i jumped in. In the fall I had to dress appropriate Summer was over I had important things to do. I had my toys expensive babydolls They did everything. I had to love and care for them. I met my match before i conceived this. We were one. In the winter, it is so cold. I had to wear a coat to keep me warm. I didnt have my babydolls anymore. I was so tired. I took long naps and one day I woke up. enoch2

Up the ladder: forget me nots
Down the ladder: Gone

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6454
Posted: April 25, 2005 9:16 AM PDT; Last modified: April 25, 2005 9:16 AM PDT
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[9] mendoju @ 4.186.114.13 | 9-May-05/3:33 PM | Reply
Hi Enoch2, I thought your poem was wonderful, it took me back to my childhood! I'm gonna print it and have my brother Joey read it - I'm sure he'll enjoy your beautiful words. Bye...Judy
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 7-Mar-06/3:09 PM | Reply
Heh, quite nice - although I think you meant 'shone' (line 6). I do like the last two lines, they made me smile. An 8 should undo some of the damage caused by rockmage's (rather impressive) zeroing marathon.
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