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Fate

by Fayt

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 6 May 2005 · 4 comments

It binds us all to its sadistic ways, It chooses what you do, who you are, and what you say, It controls your each action in everyway, Your thoughts are no longer yours, Fate has won the day, It is Fate, the way of things, it never sways.

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[6] Dovina 7-May-05/6:47 AM Reply
If this is true, you can do anything you want because it is not you making the choice, and nobody is responsible.
[6] mystic enoch 9-May-05/12:07 PM Reply
It controls your actions in everyway.
[n/a] Fayt › mystic enoch 10-May-05/9:50 AM Reply
gd observation, i wrote this quickly and didnt realise, id change it but it has to be completely reset... :(
[n/a] SupremeDreamer 16-May-05/5:13 PM Reply
Fuck fate, manifest your own destiny and steal the devils luck.