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Fate (Free verse) by Fayt
It binds us all to its sadistic ways, It chooses what you do, who you are, and what you say, It controls your each action in everyway, Your thoughts are no longer yours, Fate has won the day, It is Fate, the way of things, it never sways.

Up the ladder: sea of pearls
Down the ladder: Iron Sky

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6899
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2005 11:08 PM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 7-May-05/6:47 AM | Reply
If this is true, you can do anything you want because it is not you making the choice, and nobody is responsible.
[6] mystic enoch @ 209.215.39.12 | 9-May-05/12:07 PM | Reply
It controls your actions in everyway.
[n/a] Fayt @ 66.217.137.207 > mystic enoch | 10-May-05/9:50 AM | Reply
gd observation, i wrote this quickly and didnt realise, id change it but it has to be completely reset... :(
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.2.5.40 | 16-May-05/5:13 PM | Reply
Fuck fate, manifest your own destiny and steal the devils luck.
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