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Fate (Free verse) by Fayt

It binds us all to its sadistic ways, It chooses what you do, who you are, and what you say, It controls your each action in everyway, Your thoughts are no longer yours, Fate has won the day, It is Fate, the way of things, it never sways.

Fayt 10-May-05/9:50 AM
gd observation, i wrote this quickly and didnt realise, id change it but it has to be completely reset... :(




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