Dovina
replying on Old Friend by Dovina
10 May 2005, 10:45 AM
Would you like it better if it didnâÂÂt rhyme?
Some people say a dog knows when its death is near. I prefer to think that an event so traumatic and unknown before entering it cannot be understood by a dog to the extent that humans can understand it. I think our knowledge on the subject has done us little good.
Hey, sorry to get all serious on you and offend your sensibilities regarding the intelligence of dogs, but really, wouldn't rather not know?
Is line 6 a call to all bearded people.
Beards can be weighty can't they
1) i was testing out the features because im new here, i made this username about 6 months ago but never really used it, so i was seeing how it worked.
2)What do u mean by that?
3)I take that as a insult, i dont write poetry as a means to amuse others but as a means to vent my thoughts. Seeing as i was curious as of what others thought of it i posted it here; so don't criticize me by saying i am silly and others do it better.
Not particularly.
It is very hard to explain...
Growing up i have always wondered if there was a pre-set fate for all of us to follow, and whether humans as a whole are good or evil, this is a representation of my thoughts gathered in a poem. That may sound confusing, but to me it makes sense in my mind.
And more unwanted children are passed on between straight partners. Weird innit?
what improvements do u have in mind?
What words do u suggest?
'Journey, Debbie Deb, Swatch'
...What do you think of this over-exploring of American Culture, Zodiac?
'Petula Clarke singing about downtown'
...And what do you think of this over-exploring of forgotten American Culture?...
some deleted user
replying on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake
10 May 2005, 6:47 AM
Don't make fun of her. This is not a good poem, but it's sincere.
Hallmark
replying on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake
10 May 2005, 5:48 AM
It means he was fat.
Alexander
You're welcome. No poem; in my village we only get one English-language radio station. It's biggest hits are Lionel Richie's "Hello?" and George Michaels' "Careless Whisper" - both, incidentally, memorized by all Jordanians over 12. I hear Debbie Deb and Journey at least once a day.
A poem of yours? Cryptic comment? Thank you?
"stumling" should be "stumbling".
Dear Christ.
You can't say "Now thy will hold everything". You can say, "Now thou willest hold everything", or "Now thou wilst hold everything", or "Now thy will holds everything". But you probably shouldn't.
Also, "strikith" should be "striketh". And why are you talking like some drunken Cotton Mather?
"He was around when he was alive"
What exactly does that mean?