Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	10-May-05/10:45 AM
Would you like it better if it didn’t rhyme?
Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	10-May-05/10:44 AM
Some people say a dog knows when its death is near. I prefer to think that an event so traumatic and unknown before entering it cannot be understood by a dog to the extent that humans can understand it. I think our knowledge on the subject has done us little good.
Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	10-May-05/10:36 AM
Hey, sorry to get all serious on you and offend your sensibilities regarding the intelligence of dogs, but really, wouldn't rather not know?
Re: a comment on Panama by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	10-May-05/10:32 AM
Dad Gum It, man! This is as much people as a beautiful isthums can be, and possibly penetrable with a gentlemanly approach.
Re: a comment on Blinking by zodiac	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/10:16 AM
i have to agree. it is quite good till the end.
Re: The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	10-May-05/10:11 AM
Is line 6 a call to all bearded people. Beards can be weighty can't they
Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/10:09 AM
1) i was testing out the features because im new here, i made this username about 6 months ago but never really used it, so i was seeing how it worked. 2)What do u mean by that? 3)I take that as a insult, i dont write poetry as a means to amuse others but as a means to vent my thoughts. Seeing as i was curious as of what others thought of it i posted it here; so don't criticize me by saying i am silly and others do it better.
Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/10:04 AM
Not particularly. It is very hard to explain... Growing up i have always wondered if there was a pre-set fate for all of us to follow, and whether humans as a whole are good or evil, this is a representation of my thoughts gathered in a poem. That may sound confusing, but to me it makes sense in my mind.
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Christof 62.121.23.56	10-May-05/9:59 AM
And more unwanted children are passed on between straight partners. Weird innit?
Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/9:57 AM
??? This is the only username i have ever used.
Re: a comment on Go now if you want it. by Fayt	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/9:53 AM
what improvements do u have in mind? What words do u suggest?
Re: a comment on Fate by Fayt	Fayt 66.217.137.207	10-May-05/9:50 AM
gd observation, i wrote this quickly and didnt realise, id change it but it has to be completely reset... :(
Re: a comment on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	10-May-05/8:51 AM
'Journey, Debbie Deb, Swatch' ...What do you think of this over-exploring of American Culture, Zodiac? 'Petula Clarke singing about downtown' ...And what do you think of this over-exploring of forgotten American Culture?...
Re: a comment on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	10-May-05/6:47 AM
Don't make fun of her. This is not a good poem, but it's sincere.
Re: a comment on Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	10-May-05/5:48 AM
It means he was fat. Alexander
Re: a comment on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/4:11 AM
You're welcome. No poem; in my village we only get one English-language radio station. It's biggest hits are Lionel Richie's "Hello?" and George Michaels' "Careless Whisper" - both, incidentally, memorized by all Jordanians over 12. I hear Debbie Deb and Journey at least once a day.
Re: a comment on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee	jessicazee 152.163.100.195	10-May-05/3:50 AM
A poem of yours? Cryptic comment? Thank you?
Re: stumbling into love by sungoesdown	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/3:30 AM
"stumling" should be "stumbling".
Re: The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/3:29 AM
Dear Christ. You can't say "Now thy will hold everything". You can say, "Now thou willest hold everything", or "Now thou wilst hold everything", or "Now thy will holds everything". But you probably shouldn't. Also, "strikith" should be "striketh". And why are you talking like some drunken Cotton Mather?
Re: Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/3:20 AM
"He was around when he was alive" What exactly does that mean?