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stumbling into love (Free verse) by sungoesdown
Tip-toe around the terminology.
Unsure of the response,
Slight possibilities silence
That which screams within.
Do you hear it, too?
Give thanks
To What I don't know,
Because every morning
I wake up with a surprise.
A smile.
Insecurities that surface
With the world's favorite vice,
Upon reflection reveal
That I am (at last)
Alive.
With every tomorrow,
I can see you smile
As you look away
And feel my eyes
Still upon you.
The shouting is reinforced
And my concerns give
Much to look forward to,
Because I need nothing more
Than this.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6110
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2005 10:13 AM PDT
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