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stumbling into love (Free verse) by sungoesdown
Tip-toe around the terminology. Unsure of the response, Slight possibilities silence That which screams within. Do you hear it, too? Give thanks To What I don't know, Because every morning I wake up with a surprise. A smile. Insecurities that surface With the world's favorite vice, Upon reflection reveal That I am (at last) Alive. With every tomorrow, I can see you smile As you look away And feel my eyes Still upon you. The shouting is reinforced And my concerns give Much to look forward to, Because I need nothing more Than this.

Up the ladder: life in general
Down the ladder: puff

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6110
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2005 10:13 AM PDT
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[8] zodiac @ 213.186.177.137 | 10-May-05/3:30 AM | Reply
"stumling" should be "stumbling".
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