Re: On the Swings by Christof	Ranger 81.158.153.183	8-Dec-07/4:48 AM
This is utterly wonderful. Why is it buried away?
Re: INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT	Ranger 81.158.153.183	8-Dec-07/4:45 AM
The last 6 lines are the best I've seen on poemeranker in months. The grammar Gestapo are going to be calling round about a couple of those apostrophes though.
Re: Day Dream by Jessina	Ranger 81.158.153.183	8-Dec-07/4:37 AM
Pretty.
Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT	Ranger 81.158.153.183	8-Dec-07/4:34 AM
Perfect word choice, but it left me wanting something more. Do you use sat-nav in your cab?
Re: Day Dream by Jessina	Prince of Void 80.71.127.249	7-Dec-07/11:34 PM
a nice poem ..
Re: Whore of Babylon by oneglove	oneglove 71.79.52.193	7-Dec-07/9:24 AM
work in progress, just felt like posting something since i havent in so long
Re: a comment on Day Dream by Jessina	Jessina 203.199.41.148	5-Dec-07/11:31 PM
Thanks a lot Dovina.... i was trying to make it rhyming dear..... Thanks a ton for your constructive criticism and surely will improve more in my next attempt.
Re: disregard by Skamper	Dovina 75.82.99.11	4-Dec-07/2:05 PM
First 5 lines draw me in, then into what? You lose me in midstream, and at the end I wonder what I read.
Re: Day Dream by Jessina	Dovina 75.82.99.11	4-Dec-07/2:00 PM
a nice attempt at old-time charm. Some of the articles and pronouns can go I think, i.e. "Where he waltz with his amazing charm" = Where he waltzes with amazing charm. With treasured violin in hand Composing blissful ardent hymns
Re: uh..huh.. by nobody	Dovina 75.82.99.11	4-Dec-07/1:55 PM
too many words, too little said
Re: a comment on Engine Braking by INTRANSIT	Dovina 75.82.99.11	4-Dec-07/1:41 PM
poemranker is slooooow today
Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT	Dovina 75.82.99.11	4-Dec-07/1:40 PM
Whenever I see and hear a big-rig down-hilling with jake-brake screaming, I wonder if the driver still has ears, much less, whether he hears the wind a cooling fan makes. Maybe those things are super-sound-insulated, never been there. Tach and speed align at what? - 40mph, 4000rpm?
Re: a comment on Travails of one decade by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.124.246	4-Dec-07/11:01 AM
you're right ...But I'm a director of cinema trying to show more and less telling a detailed story ..maybe it's not prefect well I'll do my best to make it best and thanx for commenting yours are better than mine ..but we both try to keep all values and concepts of our own way to explain the beauties ...I'm trying new things ...and well different ways of telling stories .. more new narrative structures will come soon
Re: My circlet of reveries by liya	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/11:56 AM
No this one is good. And I hope I don't dissuade your writing with my (harsh?) comments, I'm no professional poem ranker or anything, I'm just here to have some fun. But with this one, while the imagery is good and it tells a story vividly the rhymes/words seem kind of forced and the style seems kind of dated. You should read a lot of new stuff, maybe you'll see. Of course, I'm not really one to talk about reading others poetry, I barely have time to read my own.
Re: a comment on Uptown spell! by liya	liya 203.199.41.148	3-Dec-07/4:29 AM
mmm Since these are my first attempts to poetry and since yours is the first comment that I got, I take it with élan. You have commented on two of my poems but not on the third” My circlet of reveries”... is it because it’s not worth commenting at all or is it because u dint read it…
Re: Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/12:37 AM
I think the Internet has lost sight of what it's really all about, that being shit, aids, dwarfs, and homos.... but lucky for us, DA is here to remind us with the vigorous thrust of his poetic fingers, over and over again! Bravo! Anyways, nice job summing up this man of mystery in a Letterman-esque sort of way.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/12:29 AM
Very nice stuff here.
Re: One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/12:27 AM
Or maybe the mushrooms on my pizza went bad... or good, depending on what you look for in mushrooms.
Re: One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/12:26 AM
It's like reading a surreal painting.
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Dark Angle 70.181.103.149	3-Dec-07/12:21 AM
This is good. Maybe shouldn't be #1. But it deserves a 10.