Re: deliberate by shrutikay	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	2-Jun-05/4:18 PM
Slightly better than the rest, but << …. >> is totally unnecessary.
Re: faster by shrutikay	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	2-Jun-05/4:05 PM
<< Speeding . ..you cant stay sublime Wallow ..n u did urself a crime >> If this spelling is te represent modern art or new experimentalism, it's wasted on me.
Re: A Poem of Nonsense by woodstock20000	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	2-Jun-05/4:02 PM
I would prefer: 'of pink, mahogany and blue'; lubricates the reading. << Forlorn - a dark reality I fall... >> is a line that truly jars. If you really want to keep it (I guess you do) at least try to add two beats to the first line in this stanza to restore balance
Re: Wanted by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	2-Jun-05/3:44 PM
Too much was cut. the other only needed some adJUSTAMENTE. Um, I'll leave my piddle on the other one later . Gotta run, sorry.
Re: Thanks again by Everyone	celticskatermatt1 68.8.219.196	2-Jun-05/3:34 PM
this poem sucks balls but thanks for the rating u gave mine...u fucking whore...my poem was about my dad but i see that u dont even appretiat a simple poem out of tribute....
Re: Adibe's Song (third-time's-the-charm revision, less Spanish) by zodiac	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/12:45 PM
Not knowing language or culture, I'd say she knotted her scarf, but can't see what she makes of it all.
Re: a comment on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/12:33 PM
I didn't write the question. It appeared in The Ladies Diary in the nineteenth century. Consider the language in use then when interpreting it. You, a math major, should do better than a mere uneducated lady who probably had to steal into her husband's office to use a log-trig book late at night.
Re: a comment on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/12:27 PM
Wrong.
Re: I thank God that he sent you to me by KezzY20	shrutikay 219.65.91.171	2-Jun-05/12:27 PM
submit this poem to sum online wedding site..they mite feature it in their journal..
Re: a comment on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/12:27 PM
You didn't answer the question, unless you mean by this: "No, but I can cheat."
Re: Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/12:20 PM
If you'd just made a list, it would say as much, and as little.
Re: Best Friends by lil_evil_boi	shrutikay 219.65.91.171	2-Jun-05/12:12 PM
funny coment there.....neways./..the poems..gud
Re: Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi	shrutikay 219.65.91.171	2-Jun-05/12:10 PM
well ritten...
Re: Captian, Doctor..Father by celticskatermatt1	shrutikay 219.65.91.171	2-Jun-05/12:07 PM
nice poem
Re: a comment on Life and Love by windyone	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/11:38 AM
1) 9 2) 5 Not including the pleasure of analyzing.
Re: a comment on Acrylic French Nails by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/11:24 AM
I did not mean to complement her, but only to compliment her. It would have been clever worded differently. As it is – just a misspelling and a good call.
Re: a comment on Acrylic French Nails by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	2-Jun-05/11:23 AM
Who knows.
Re: a comment on Life and Love by windyone	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	2-Jun-05/7:19 AM
You drive us wild we'll drive you crazy. KISS
Re: a comment on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	2-Jun-05/6:44 AM
Um, the breach in the 5th is not. The sixth, yes. The best I can do is refer you to the "gold standard" of: Do not go gentle into that good night, By Dylan Thomas. Probably easy to find on the 'net. My newer one was far better. V's are one of those poems that look easy but aren't. I did a couple of hack Ghazals once. I'm bad at forms.
Re: a comment on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	2-Jun-05/6:34 AM
I mean, I see the form and the rhyme scheme, but is the breach in the last two stanza's typical villanelle? (my directory doesn't feature the term)