|
|
Acrylic French Nails (Free verse) by Dovina
Her glistening nails,
long and thick,
newly craftedâ
the French acrylic style,
transparent finish over finger flesh,
opaque on talon ends,
where were the color ordinary
would have trimmed in
white or pink.
Nothing Iâd not want for mine,
save cost and upkeep,
(growth requiring fill,
aging causing cracks)
and yes, one other thingâ
her French nail ends were green.
Still I complimented her sincerely
then couldnât figure why,
except for shine and shape
and for a rating of herself
a person worth adorning.
Thank you, she replied,
I wanted to look different.
Then an answer rose within
in vindication of my praise,
for I could not imagine
one so bored with looking right
she employs devices
to be different.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
0 | 0 |
7 |
|
1 | 0 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
1 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10734
Posted: May 30, 2005 6:16 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2005 10:44 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
346 view(s)
|
I've had a few bashings over such subjects. Like, 'a woman should not poemise outward appearances or cosmetry hypes, let alone a man.'
Well. I've done poems about two actresses who are quite diametric in this view: Maggie Smith and Cher. Maybe I'll let you read them one day.