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38 Lines (Free verse) by auscot
1. Thirty Eight Lines
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3. I count the lines, there are thirty eight.
4. Top line title, one line blank, start on number three.
5. A long way to go, thirty three below
6. and the words just wonât flow free.
7. Seventh line now, how many left,
8. my aim is thirty eight.
9. If I fill just ten, one past nine,
10. then my score will hardly rate.
11. Itâs getting late, my mind is slow,
12. Iâm not even half way there.
13. Thirteen gone, lots more to go,
14. words are becoming rare.
15. Struggle on with fifteen gone,
16. at sixteen, going great.
17. Five minute break, second wind,
18. now on ten plus eight.
19. Itâs damned hard work this poetry,
20. the plaudits are so few.
21. One more to go, not much to show,
22. then Iâm down to twenty two.
23. Determined now to reach the end,
24. have I tried out all the tricks.
25. At twenty five, should I take a dive,
26. and finish on twenty six.
27. I canât stop now, I wonât stop now,
28. down to twenty eight.
29. Only nine lines left, on twenty nine,
30. and prospects looking great.
31. What can I say about thirty one,
32. that hasnât been said before.
33. Too late now, Iâm on thirty three,
34. no, Iâm on thirty four.
35. At thirty five, almost there,
36. next, the penultimate.
37. One more to go, the one below,
38. AT LAST, on thirty eight.
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Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10658
Posted: January 1, 2005 1:50 AM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2005 1:50 AM PST
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