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38 Lines (Free verse) by auscot
1. Thirty Eight Lines 2. 3. I count the lines, there are thirty eight. 4. Top line title, one line blank, start on number three. 5. A long way to go, thirty three below 6. and the words just won’t flow free. 7. Seventh line now, how many left, 8. my aim is thirty eight. 9. If I fill just ten, one past nine, 10. then my score will hardly rate. 11. It’s getting late, my mind is slow, 12. I’m not even half way there. 13. Thirteen gone, lots more to go, 14. words are becoming rare. 15. Struggle on with fifteen gone, 16. at sixteen, going great. 17. Five minute break, second wind, 18. now on ten plus eight. 19. It’s damned hard work this poetry, 20. the plaudits are so few. 21. One more to go, not much to show, 22. then I’m down to twenty two. 23. Determined now to reach the end, 24. have I tried out all the tricks. 25. At twenty five, should I take a dive, 26. and finish on twenty six. 27. I can’t stop now, I won’t stop now, 28. down to twenty eight. 29. Only nine lines left, on twenty nine, 30. and prospects looking great. 31. What can I say about thirty one, 32. that hasn’t been said before. 33. Too late now, I’m on thirty three, 34. no, I’m on thirty four. 35. At thirty five, almost there, 36. next, the penultimate. 37. One more to go, the one below, 38. AT LAST, on thirty eight.

Up the ladder: XYZ
Down the ladder: Lost In It

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Posted: January 1, 2005 1:50 AM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2005 1:50 AM PST
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[3] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 1-Jan-05/1:44 PM | Reply
So what? If you have writers block, just say so.
[n/a] auscot @ 138.130.95.21 > Dovina | 1-Jan-05/2:03 PM | Reply
Thanks Dovina, and here was I trying to be lighthearted amongst all the angst, bile and gloom. Is nobody happy anymore? There is a pill you can take.
[3] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 > auscot | 1-Jan-05/2:08 PM | Reply
Tsunami was good. Twin Forks was good. Why go here when you've got better stuff?
[n/a] auscot @ 138.130.95.21 > Dovina | 2-Jan-05/10:00 PM | Reply
I see my poetry as a recreational pursuit with no restrictions. I do it purely for enjoyment not kudos, It is gratifying when it is liked and enjoyed. Like my sculpture, I create for me, no other. I just happened to have a sheet with 38 lines and I filled it. It gave you no satisfaction, but I enjoyed doing it and that is what counts. Let's face it, in posting on this site we are playing minor league, very few posts would cut the mustard in the world of poetry publishing. It's the enjoyment that matters, at least for me.
[8] richa @ 81.178.205.75 > auscot | 3-Jan-05/6:40 AM | Reply
Jesus Christ. Of course your enjoyment is not what counts. This isn't some self-help group. This is the mean streets of poetry buddy. We cut the mustard with an eight-inch blade and don't you forget it.
[8] richa @ 81.178.222.175 > richa | 3-Jan-05/2:55 PM | Reply
yeah that's right; an eight-inch blade. That'd damage the internal organs of even a super-porker.
[n/a] auscot @ 138.130.95.21 > richa | 3-Jan-05/5:19 PM | Reply
Wow, isn't it fun when you strike a raw nerve.
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.118.11.30 > auscot | 3-Jan-05/11:18 PM | Reply
Yes, but this is Standard Bumling Response #[funny number].
[n/a] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 > auscot | 3-Jan-05/7:03 AM | Reply
Hey -=DA=- which standard comment response is this one? Number 11, I think.
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.118.11.30 > auscot | 1-Jan-05/10:13 PM | Reply
What kind of poetry website are you reading poems on? Obviously, you haven't yet seen gems like http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=64816
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