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Thanks again (Cinquain) by Everyone "Thanks stephen again. Listen you are the the type of people that need
to infest the world if we are to save it."
Up the ladder:
fog
Down the ladder:
laporoscopic library
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Posted: April 15, 2005 10:44 PM PDT; Last modified: April 15, 2005 10:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4832 Comments:
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Christof @ 62.121.23.56
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16-Apr-05/5:00 AM
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I feel as if I've stumbled into the middle of a private conversation. How embarrassing.
A five line poem, syllable structure 2 (1st line), 4 (2nd), 6 (3rd), 8 (4th), 2 (5th). The last two syllables should both be stressed and nouns and verbs should feature more promiently than adjectives and adverbs.
And I remember seeing that very comment just a day or two ago. Way to go with the shaping of minds there. Very telling. <3 Jason
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I'll take ten pounds not to tell.
I did not betray my friend Damien by publishing this filth.
this poem sucks balls but thanks for the rating u gave mine...u fucking whore...my poem was about my dad but i see that u dont even appretiat a simple poem out of tribute....
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