| Re: a comment on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138 |
2-Jun-05/6:15 AM |
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| Re: Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines by zodiac |
al-naafiysh 204.215.33.89 |
2-Jun-05/6:00 AM |
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Zo I love this poem.
I love the change of heart, I knew there was another
side of you that was senitive
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| Re: a comment on Captian, Doctor..Father by celticskatermatt1 |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
2-Jun-05/5:35 AM |
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As a youth idolising your father often turns to hate or contempt in later years, which makes for far more interesting poems. But often is not always and this is a nice and gentle tribute.
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| Re: Fair Warning by cockmage |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
2-Jun-05/5:29 AM |
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Script kiddies are today's ultimate brats. You would be surprised to know how many are over age. Like this one; an online coward and a failure in bed, as the words disclose.
"...Ernie! You're not downloading bathing young boys again, do you? Now hurry, or we'll miss mass!"
"Yes dear, I'm cummin', dear."
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| Re: Captian, Doctor..Father by celticskatermatt1 |
Everyone 213.186.178.93 |
2-Jun-05/4:36 AM |
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Please consider making the following revisions:
standing => squatting,
basking => bisqueing,
buttons => buttocks,
Captain, Doctor... Father => Master, Doctor?... Father?
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| Re: Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi |
zodiac 213.186.178.93 |
2-Jun-05/3:55 AM |
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The best part was where you described heaven as "heavenly" and hell as "hellish".
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| Re: Fair Warning by cockmage |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
2-Jun-05/3:03 AM |
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Please keep the picture of his beard.
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| Re: a comment on Life and Love by windyone |
windyone 63.245.189.144 |
2-Jun-05/2:40 AM |
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LOL! ok you got me! 10 and 9 :-)
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| Re: a comment on Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines by zodiac |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/10:07 PM |
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Well, the ending is her talking, the rest is the guy. Does that help? Or - I meant the part beginning with the second "My love" to be a different day.
For my part, yes, there was a change of heart. Right around the dress-doffing and kissing part.
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| Re: a comment on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/10:03 PM |
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What an astonishingly ladylike question you've picked for a rebuttal, though! "Just cover the bottom"? What the fuck does that mean?
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| Re: a comment on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/10:02 PM |
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In a frictionless world, zero.
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| Re: a comment on Acrylic French Nails by Dovina |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/9:59 PM |
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PS-"complemented" is clever as it is, but are you sure you didn't mean "complimented"?
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| Re: a comment on Acrylic French Nails by Dovina |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/9:58 PM |
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Oh.
Just out of curiosity, why didn't you have this experience when you were, like, 10?
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| Re: a comment on Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/9:53 PM |
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I probably said that, actually. I was in a hurry typing.
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| Re: a comment on Life and Love by windyone |
zodiac 212.118.19.179 |
1-Jun-05/9:51 PM |
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Would you take the above a step farther and agree that, on average, the analyzing person leads a less pleasurable life than the non-analyzing person? Would you consider testing that notion?
***ZODIAC'S SIMPLE TEST***
1) On a scale of 1-10, 1 being 'never' and 10 being 'constantly', how much of the time would you say you analyze things?
2) On a scale of 1-10, 1 being 'not at all pleasurable' and 10 being 'extremely pleasurable', how pleasurable would you say your life is?
For my part, I promise to answer fairly.
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| Re: Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/7:57 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Best Friends by lil_evil_boi |
lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244 |
1-Jun-05/7:22 PM |
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You know, I never consider about this before, not until you mentioned it. I guess it could be about looking for God. Ben Affleck is acceptable. But as the author, i would prefer God.
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| Re: Best Friends by lil_evil_boi |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/6:24 PM |
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...Looking for God, perhaps?
Or Ben Affleck?
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| Re: My back (An explanation) by Stephen Robins |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
1-Jun-05/8:02 AM |
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This is the best poem to have appeared on Poemranker since "The Huntsman's Secret".
Yours &c.
Henry Trumpington-Pigg
P.S. As you may have noticed, rockmage has a very bad case of AIDS, caused primarily by his excessive gayness.
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| Re: My back (An explanation) by Stephen Robins |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/7:21 AM |
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Metrics, um, jiggle a bit...
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