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Heaven or Hell (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi
Perhaps the greatest of all miracles of healing, is when we reach our eternal dwelling. Where the only tears are of those left behind, don't have to worry about anything in the clueless mind. Heaven has a place prepared for me and you, hell is another place that has one too. There is no other place we can choose to go, it's either heaven above or hell down below. Heaven is a place with streets paved with gold, hell is a fiery furnace with unquenchable coals. Heaven is found with forgiveness and prayer, hell doesn't care; it will take you, as a sinner. I traveled to heaven and hell. Both a place so unique to tell. I looked and waited for the tunnel of light, instead, demons greeted me left and right. As their wicked claws pierced my flesh, I struggled in vain for peace and rest. Harder and harder, they clawed my skin, I fought so hard, but could not win. "Let me go back, let me live again!" They laughed with vengeance and welcomed my sins. The tunnel of light I could not find, agony and pain devoured the time. "Lord," I prayed, "forgive my sins.” "Show me the light. We can't let them win.” Weak was my body; weak was my mind, but strong was my faith. God answers on time. Suddenly, a light appeared so bright, my soul was peaceful; it had lights in sight. It lifted me above the clouds and sky, I thanked the Lord, yet I sighed and sighed. We are all wanted for one place or the other, there is no place in-between to run for cover. We must now decide where we intend to stay, do you wish upon the heavenly heaven? Or the hellish hell? Fate is in your own hands. Be prepared to shout to the world your demands. No choice is wrong, no choice is right. Whichever suits you, go there with no fright.

Down the ladder: wibble wibble honk

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Overall Rank: 6477
Posted: June 1, 2005 5:48 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2005 8:21 PM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 213.186.178.93 | 2-Jun-05/3:55 AM | Reply
The best part was where you described heaven as "heavenly" and hell as "hellish".
[n/a] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 > zodiac | 4-Jun-05/5:34 PM | Reply
Glad that you liked it.
[7] sacred_poet_me @ 70.68.76.244 | 6-Jun-05/4:56 PM | Reply
Spectacular...
[n/a] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 > sacred_poet_me | 6-Jun-05/5:53 PM | Reply
Thx!
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