Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

faster (Free verse) by shrutikay
A shadowy evening Its on broadcast The overcast Moves along The thunder ..fast Silver lining Don’t explain I knew u were never sane Albeit the universe Trudges on lines of fame Faster ..in haste Encompassing the reference frame If phycosis is the base Include me in the race Cradled ..no..dont disgrace Inherited ..coherently The worlds but a small place Lends an apetite for craze Its just a matter of time Speeding . ..you cant stay sublime Wallow ..n u did urself a crime Homes close..soon we will pass by The land beyond Seems terrifying With a pace to race the maze Straighten out the haze Its almost the stage Drowning in floods of galaxies Sanity is not its cup of tea Yet faster she flies like a wild phoenix Catching fire every now and then Igniting…. extinguishing No time to relay 2 lives go against the rules of play

Up the ladder: missing pieces
Down the ladder: By My Window

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 00

Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12369
Posted: June 2, 2005 11:57 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2005 11:57 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[1] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 2-Jun-05/4:05 PM | Reply
<< Speeding . ..you cant stay sublime
Wallow ..n u did urself a crime >>

If this spelling is te represent modern art or new experimentalism, it's wasted on me.
156 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001