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faster (Free verse) by shrutikay
A shadowy evening
Its on broadcast
The overcast
Moves along
The thunder ..fast
Silver lining
Donât explain
I knew u were
never sane
Albeit the universe
Trudges on lines of fame
Faster ..in haste
Encompassing the reference frame
If phycosis is the base
Include me in the race
Cradled ..no..dont disgrace
Inherited ..coherently
The worlds but a small place
Lends an apetite for craze
Its just a matter of time
Speeding . ..you cant stay sublime
Wallow ..n u did urself a crime
Homes close..soon we will pass by
The land beyond
Seems terrifying
With a pace to race the maze
Straighten out the haze
Its almost the stage
Drowning in floods of galaxies
Sanity is not its cup of tea
Yet faster she flies like a wild phoenix
Catching fire every now and then
Ignitingâ¦. extinguishing
No time to relay
2 lives go against the rules of play
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Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12377
Posted: June 2, 2005 11:57 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2005 11:57 AM PDT
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Wallow ..n u did urself a crime >>
If this spelling is te represent modern art or new experimentalism, it's wasted on me.