Dovina
replying on Mother Earth by TLRufener
5 Jul 2005, 1:26 PM
So, what's new or differently expressed? That's well known.
When you say you are transparent as vanity, it could imply that you are vain, or it could mean that you are transparent, but not necessarily vain. The last line seems to say you are vain, as in having other women.
gods wife.
could you explain the other way dovina.
thanks.
This a poem of Mother Earth. It is a description, but it is an immortalization of Her life cycle.
This absolutely beautiful.
I love how you left the misspelling in to illustrate the lack of education in Africa. That's great.
Who is G/W?
D? No offense dear, I think you're trying too hard on this one, and the last. Set aside the cow thing for a while and go read G/Ws stuff. Here's the in door: Cyclical ketchup monstrosity.
P.S. I see cows a lot in my travels but aint put pen to paper yet. glad you did.
I don't see any point to this beyond a description.
Typo corrected. Stanzas 4,5,7 have been altered.
I really don't care what is pop and what is not, but I like the way you've made an issue of it.
"as transparent as vanity" is a good line because it can mean at least two things. I wish you had gone the other way with it.
Three types of pop? Pop as in pop culture, as in father, and as a measure of a moment quickly passed? I stll am not getting much O'Hara. Maybe it's me.
You're right, it's not smart to love in this way. Unless this is poking fun at people who do, and I don't see hints of that, it is shallow.
The word "feigning" sets a stage for sattire or belittlement. But I don't think that's what you intend.
I use the word steep to describe the severity
of the disconnection.
and vanity I always thought as being an obvious
characteristic.
everyoneâs interpretation is different but
I thank you for your opinion.
It makes my heart hurt and that's a good thing.
very good.
you're welcome.