Re: a comment on Moving Up by jessicazee	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	25-Jul-05/4:40 PM
That ambiguity works for me.
Re: Worth by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.197	25-Jul-05/4:33 PM
And it's look, rude, unbending, lusty, made me think of myself,.... but not quite.
Re: a comment on The sunset sea. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	25-Jul-05/4:10 PM
Always thank you for your criticism and praise. I'm destined to be one of those writers who frustrates the hell out of you. I always reread and revise my poems before I post them. the words I use are in my grasp otherwise I would'nt use them. when I was young if I came across a word I did'nt know I looked it up. so my vocabulary increased. to not use the words I know would deny who I am. and you are a great writer. I always respond to your comments. much love. steve.
Re: a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	25-Jul-05/4:01 PM
I get that allot. I'll try. thanks for the input.
Re: Worth by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.130	25-Jul-05/3:59 PM
I enjoyed this very much. 8
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	impert&ent 80.195.201.212	25-Jul-05/2:16 PM
It all began with Jon Jonsson, who came from Wisconsin, and worked in a graveyard there. Whether late at night or in broad daylight, he asked himself this thing: where did it start and where will it end and how will we know which is which? Day after day and year after year he asked, until one day he passed. In his pocket they found a note that said 'put this on my stone: It all began with Jon Jonsson'.
Re: a comment on Polar Bearings by impert&ent	impert&ent 80.195.201.212	25-Jul-05/2:00 PM
Basically. With the possible addition of some golly wogs and funny hats.
Re: Polar Bearings by impert&ent	T. Jonathron Remp 69.152.93.158	25-Jul-05/12:54 PM
And out of this egg would come lifegoo suspending quite an enormous young megaturtle
Re: a comment on SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE by prettyktm	Stephen Robins 84.13.133.201	25-Jul-05/11:42 AM
Dovina, only waddling middle adged lezzas with no confidence in their butch looks preface a comment with the expression "I mean".
Re: THE HANDS OF THE CLOCK by prettyktm	Stephen Robins 84.13.133.201	25-Jul-05/11:32 AM
Richard Whiteley once told me to fuck off. I think he meant the message to be passed on to you from beyond the grave.
Re: Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	Stephen Robins 84.13.133.201	25-Jul-05/11:31 AM
If gayness could be reduced to its raw intrinsic matter and then condensed into some form of compound it would be a potion on which you would daily have gorged until your bottom was as dilated as a blue whales snatch.
Re: My Golden Birthday by jessicazee	Stephen Robins 84.13.133.201	25-Jul-05/11:28 AM
A terrible ripple of bottom fat on an otherwise blemish-free nappy.
Re: Worth by Dovina	Stephen Robins 84.13.133.201	25-Jul-05/11:26 AM
I see from this poem that you are still a terribly wounded ditch pig.
Re: a comment on SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE by prettyktm	Dovina 212.71.114.134	25-Jul-05/6:38 AM
I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.
Re: a comment on Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	Dovina 212.71.114.134	25-Jul-05/6:36 AM
I mean only that a carot, carved like a knief, can hurt if I think it can hurt, or if you hit me hard enough with it.
Re: a comment on Noble oboe now sings every next saturday evening by ALChemy	Dovina 212.71.114.134	25-Jul-05/6:32 AM
I,m not pleased with it. Weizen is German beer. Dunken, probably spelled wrong, is the dark vaqriety.
Re: Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	Nuit 86.128.92.138	25-Jul-05/3:09 AM
7 for the comedy value, and the adverse spiritual affects. You poor soul...!
Re: a comment on SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE by prettyktm	prettyktm 203.115.81.186	25-Jul-05/2:26 AM
Thanks for your comment and thanks for being frank.
Re: a comment on Decoys and Disguises behind large-areas of smoke screens by Beyond_Dreams	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 71.133.245.248	24-Jul-05/1:04 PM
funny, I instantly thought of Full Metal Jacket. and that movie with the guy with spray-painted feet. N0__ wait, that's not in a movie,it's a guy that sleeps in front of PaintMart spending all day huffing, but he's gone quite mad and thinks his nose is in his feet.
Re: A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 71.133.245.248	24-Jul-05/12:58 PM
What is hilarious is how you think his actions have to do with YOU. You are not very good at poetry no matter what you think. I've never liked anything you've written. But what does it matter? you wouldn't like my poetry either. this too, is a bad poem.