INTRANSIT
replying on Moving Up by jessicazee
25 Jul 2005, 4:40 PM
That ambiguity works for me.
Always thank you for your criticism and praise.
I'm destined to be one of those writers who frustrates
the hell out of you. I always reread and revise my poems
before I post them. the words I use are in my grasp
otherwise I would'nt use them. when I was young if I came
across a word I did'nt know I looked it up.
so my vocabulary increased. to not use the words I know
would deny who I am.
and you are a great writer.
I always respond to your comments.
much love.
steve.
It all began with Jon Jonsson, who came from Wisconsin, and worked in a graveyard there. Whether late at night or in broad daylight, he asked himself this thing: where did it start and where will it end and how will we know which is which? Day after day and year after year he asked, until one day he passed. In his pocket they found a note that said 'put this on my stone: It all began with Jon Jonsson'.
Basically. With the possible addition of some golly wogs and funny hats.
And out of this egg would come lifegoo suspending quite an enormous young megaturtle
Dovina, only waddling middle adged lezzas with no confidence in their butch looks preface a comment with the expression "I mean".
Richard Whiteley once told me to fuck off. I think he meant the message to be passed on to you from beyond the grave.
If gayness could be reduced to its raw intrinsic matter and then condensed into some form of compound it would be a potion on which you would daily have gorged until your bottom was as dilated as a blue whales snatch.
A terrible ripple of bottom fat on an otherwise blemish-free nappy.
I see from this poem that you are still a terribly wounded ditch pig.
I mean, you`d have to show me a heap of love in your eyes to compensate for what I'm hearing from your pen.
I mean only that a carot, carved like a knief, can hurt if I think it can hurt, or if you hit me hard enough with it.
I,m not pleased with it. Weizen is German beer. Dunken, probably spelled wrong, is the dark vaqriety.
7 for the comedy value, and the adverse spiritual affects. You poor soul...!
Thanks for your comment and thanks for being frank.
Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
replying on Decoys and Disguises behind large-areas of smoke screens by Beyond_Dreams
24 Jul 2005, 1:04 PM
funny, I instantly thought of Full Metal Jacket. and that movie with the guy with spray-painted feet. N0__ wait, that's not in a movie,it's a guy that sleeps in front of PaintMart spending all day huffing, but he's gone quite mad and thinks his nose is in his feet.
Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
on A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
24 Jul 2005, 12:58 PM
What is hilarious is how you think his actions have to do with YOU.
You are not very good at poetry no matter what you think. I've never liked anything you've written. But what does it matter? you wouldn't like my poetry either.
this too, is a bad poem.