Re: a comment on Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.138	26-Jul-05/10:51 PM
Stephen...WHAT???!!! Do you have some kind of complex? sheesh...you can't giggle at this? You have to take it so serious as to write a comment like that...man, you need to get out more...take yoga...meditate, get some meds...something!
Re: Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:48 PM
LMAO...wow...what fun non-sense...can't give it a high score, though it was good for a chuckle. You have a strange sense of humor...one I see in more than a few unique friends of mine.
Re: A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:44 PM
Dearest pinkbunnyofDOOM...just an observation...you start out saying you don't care...but the fact that you responded, and at length, contradicts that assertion. (Along with the fact that you find it disturbing, albiet, at the slightest.) I don't know the politics going on behind this post...and don't care to. I would share, however, that I find a strange sense of disturbing satisfaction at the thought that this site is set up to observe behaviour and writing, and perhaps writers...and if I were the observer, I would be quite amused....oh, wait, I AM an observer...and I am...(quite amused.)
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:35 PM
Here, Here! What fun! Thanks for sharing!
Re: Noble oboe now sings every next saturday evening by ALChemy	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:32 PM
I thought the use of 'upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite" a little long-winded..and ? unclear...otherwise I like it. I was thinking...> upon the moonbeamed__________ (something).
Re: Worth by Dovina	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:27 PM
hmmm....cool...though you lost me on stanza 3.
Re: Polar Bearings by impert&ent	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:22 PM
YESss! Woo-Hoo!!!!! Two thumbs up!
Re: Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:16 PM
hmmm...kinda cool!
Re: Showtime by INTRANSIT	LilMsLadyPoet 152.163.100.67	26-Jul-05/10:14 PM
man! This actually got my attention, as I kept on reading, and then you dropped the ball! CHOP! END> Nothing...it fell on its face! finish the thought here...you were rambling on with a story, that must have been leading somewhere...finish it!
Re: a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	26-Jul-05/3:40 PM
Thank you for reading. I do strive to be better.
Re: Hindsight by darby pyn	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.139	26-Jul-05/6:34 AM
" I was their chocolate." Ace. I'm guessing most (95%) of all children are unplanned and then resented by their parents. There's potential here but it's gonna take work.
Re: Jennifer won the war. by darby pyn	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.139	26-Jul-05/6:29 AM
Monster.
Re: Worth by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	26-Jul-05/1:48 AM
A little punctuation problem but it sounds good. I'm not sure you need "of a coin" in verse 3. You did a good job of avoiding sounding like a tree hugger.
Re: a comment on Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	zodiac 212.118.19.130	26-Jul-05/1:15 AM
This is all kind of a silly discussion. The truth is a carrot can simply hurt you, period. Not figuratively. Not because of your belief. Because you could stab somebody really hard with it. In my country we have carrots as thick as your wrist, and that's the friggin desert.
Re: a comment on Dovecote by zodiac	zodiac 212.118.19.130	26-Jul-05/1:12 AM
If you live to give happiness, how can you have any certainty the net happiness of the world is increased? People could just be lying and saying "Oh, I love lilacs!" or "Great party, Dovina!" If you live for your own happiness, and assuming happiness for you doesn't mean garrotting toddlers or something, then aren't you at least sure to increase the happiness of the world by a small amount? And who really believes their own happiness requires somebody else's harm? Because I have a feeling murderous or abusive deviance is going to come up somewhere, I'll go ahead and say I think people who supposedly get off on murder or hurting others are products of your philosophy (ie, living for your own pleasure rather than somebody else's is somewhat sinful) and not mine. At least that's what I get from movies and a kind of haphazard experience in mental health: If the guy weren't taught it's shameful to engage in normal sex/emoting/whatever, he'd probably do that instead of some furtive and twisted version of it.
Re: A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.118.19.130	26-Jul-05/1:04 AM
You are childish. This proves it.
Re: a comment on A Good Man Ruined by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.130	26-Jul-05/1:03 AM
Are you drunk? From the POV of Jimmy Buffet's song, the only people who don't know by the end of the song are the "some people" who claim it's the fault of a woman. From the POV of your poem, the only people who don't know are the people who "told" him it's woman's fault. Still not seeing the difference. None of the rest of your comment comes across in the poem. So whether it rings with me is kind of immaterial. I think most of your commenters would agree.
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	zodiac 212.118.19.130	26-Jul-05/1:00 AM
Don't you think the Romans probably knew what the word meant? And the Middle English? And, personally, I did. -7-
Re: a comment on Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 69.152.93.158	25-Jul-05/9:37 PM
mostly wrong!
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.197	25-Jul-05/9:05 PM
alllright ALRIGHT!