| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 |
Caducus 172.214.52.232 |
9-Aug-05/8:04 AM |
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Retitle - 'Plug'
I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.
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| Re: First by Dovina |
Caducus 172.214.52.232 |
9-Aug-05/8:03 AM |
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A guess - Mr Springer
Final thought - confuzled.
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:56 AM |
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You've got potentisl for a good poem here, but the grammar is terrible.
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| Re: My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:52 AM |
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"two" "dark"
Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
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| Re: a comment on More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:42 AM |
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Thanks for saying "even Dovina didn't catch it." Makes a person feel almost omnipotent.
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| Re: a comment on Never born. by | Broken | |
Dovina 12.72.22.143 |
9-Aug-05/7:39 AM |
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You can say those things, but you cannot prove them, just as CS Lewis cannot prove his statement. You are applying blunt logic to sensual things, and it comes out terse and without feeling. I'm not opposed to mixing logic and feelings, but I think you go too far in the logic direction.
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| Re: a comment on More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
XOXScottishgrlXOX 64.12.117.5 |
9-Aug-05/5:15 AM |
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I didn't even think about it! I have been out of school for almost three months. Thanks for pointing it out to me!!!!
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| Re: a comment on That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
XOXScottishgrlXOX 64.12.117.5 |
9-Aug-05/5:12 AM |
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I meant It was love at first sight. I was going to edit it, but I didn't want to lose all my votes!!!!
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:18 AM |
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Is the right half written in Elvish? Clever!
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| Re: Waiting Room by jessicazee |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:16 AM |
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You're currently the best writer on the site. For what it's worth. An honest-to-goodness 10.
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| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:14 AM |
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Everyone has whose problems? Don't you mean 'Everyone has his (or her) problems'? Or even better, 'Everyone has problems'?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
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| Re: That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/2:10 AM |
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I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
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| Re: That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:46 AM |
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I was love at first sight? a little narcissistic don't you think.
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| Re: BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/1:43 AM |
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The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
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| Re: a comment on Never born. by | Broken | |
zodiac 86.108.12.51 |
9-Aug-05/1:42 AM |
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Oh. Then I can rightly say, "The worst dissatisfactions on earth are lacking something"? Or "The most boring boredom on earth falls short of the ideal of boredom?" Or "The itchiest itch is only a shadow of some greater almighty itch"?
Jeez, aren't we pretty lucky on the whole? Not the least for not having a God who's into extremes, or we'd have killed ourselves ages ago.
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| Re: Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:41 AM |
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How does Silly Putty make hilarious noises?
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| Re: I Never Thought by TLRufener |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:31 AM |
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Holding unfurled fags huh? Must be a San Fransisco thing. People will judge you here. Hence the site's name. For starters don't write a poem with 19 out of 32 lines that begin with the word I. I do sympathize with your feelings in the poem though.
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
9-Aug-05/1:18 AM |
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You didn't REMEBER to put another M in remember.
By the way if you cut off your penis do you think the doctor would remember you?
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| Re: a comment on BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm |
prettyktm 203.115.81.186 |
9-Aug-05/12:20 AM |
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HI,thanks for your lovely comment and I hope that your wishes for
me come true soon.take care
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| Re: Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
8-Aug-05/2:09 PM |
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