Caducus
on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8
9 Aug 2005, 8:04 AM
Retitle - 'Plug'
I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.
"two" "dark"
Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
Thanks for saying "even Dovina didn't catch it." Makes a person feel almost omnipotent.
You can say those things, but you cannot prove them, just as CS Lewis cannot prove his statement. You are applying blunt logic to sensual things, and it comes out terse and without feeling. I'm not opposed to mixing logic and feelings, but I think you go too far in the logic direction.
I didn't even think about it! I have been out of school for almost three months. Thanks for pointing it out to me!!!!
I meant It was love at first sight. I was going to edit it, but I didn't want to lose all my votes!!!!
Is the right half written in Elvish? Clever!
You're currently the best writer on the site. For what it's worth. An honest-to-goodness 10.
Everyone has whose problems? Don't you mean 'Everyone has his (or her) problems'? Or even better, 'Everyone has problems'?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
I was love at first sight? a little narcissistic don't you think.
The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
Oh. Then I can rightly say, "The worst dissatisfactions on earth are lacking something"? Or "The most boring boredom on earth falls short of the ideal of boredom?" Or "The itchiest itch is only a shadow of some greater almighty itch"?
Jeez, aren't we pretty lucky on the whole? Not the least for not having a God who's into extremes, or we'd have killed ourselves ages ago.
How does Silly Putty make hilarious noises?
Holding unfurled fags huh? Must be a San Fransisco thing. People will judge you here. Hence the site's name. For starters don't write a poem with 19 out of 32 lines that begin with the word I. I do sympathize with your feelings in the poem though.
HI,thanks for your lovely comment and I hope that your wishes for
me come true soon.take care
Silly