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My Prince (Free verse) by XOXScottishgrlXOX
My Prince so royal and handsome He has passion and loving kindness I like spending time with him under the stars My prince loves me no matter what My Prince so poetic and charming He keeps his promises and he never lies Walking on the beach with him send chills all through my body I love my Prince no matter what My Prince so caring and passionate We live on together forever like two love birds We kiss each other goodnight under the dark stary sky We love each other no matter what

Up the ladder: Love Trail
Down the ladder: Fulfillment

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9256
Posted: August 9, 2005 7:14 AM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2005 9:10 AM PDT
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[4] Dovina @ 12.72.22.143 | 9-Aug-05/7:52 AM | Reply
"two" "dark"

Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
[n/a] XOXScottishgrlXOX @ 64.12.117.5 > Dovina | 9-Aug-05/9:12 AM | Reply
Don't you mean discovered since you said had which is past tense!! In the poem it says he never lies, which means that he doesn't.
[n/a] XOXScottishgrlXOX @ 64.12.117.5 > XOXScottishgrlXOX | 9-Aug-05/9:14 AM | Reply
i forgot to add something. Plus it would have to depend on what the lie was, and the only reason you are like saying this stuff is because i gave you a low vote. I didn't like your poem.
[4] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 > XOXScottishgrlXOX | 9-Aug-05/11:37 AM | Reply
Nope. Wrong.
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.234 | 9-Aug-05/12:22 PM | Reply
everybody lies...lol...even princesssssss...but your poem is sweet...good :) Bethy
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