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A touch so real (Free verse) by mr_ice55
Subside within myself
Compelled to breathe once more
Shadows open their arms
Enclose and draw me in
My fantasy this cannot be
A touch so real
A touch so revealing
How can I stand before you?
When your light shineâs through me
My life I would surrender for you
A passion unspeakable
To your lips I hold close
Not wanting your eyes to stray from mine
Why does the sun pursue you?
Why do tears fall with every thought of you?
Consumed by your force
My heart is dressed in you
Destiny seems entwined
Tomorrow is one more day I give to you
Behind the glass window
I watch the wind curve around your body
Folding and submitting to your power
My salvation Iâve found in you
Eternity isnât far away
When we watch the clock together
You are the wings that give me flight
I would give up forever
Just to feel you
To feel our bodies attached
For one more glance upon your beauty
The sunrise I can see in your eyes
The sunset I can feel in your lips
Attached and combined forever
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9302
Posted: April 11, 2007 5:47 AM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2007 5:47 AM PDT
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