Nice brother Sad story Were both crazy.. Thank you Sparky :) Bethy :)

Thank you Sparky...:) :) Bethy

thank you Jon...:) :) Bethy

Nope. Wrong.

No, only a certain girl was Jerry's kid.

I don't think either of them fell into any pit blind.

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Neither Geneses nor Jerry is demeaning to women in my opinion.

i forgot to add something. Plus it would have to depend on what the lie was, and the only reason you are like saying this stuff is because i gave you a low vote. I didn't like your poem.

Don't you mean discovered since you said had which is past tense!! In the poem it says he never lies, which means that he doesn't.

In regards to "Everyone has their problems" It may not be grammatically correct but it's still used in common language. Who hasn't heard a reasonably intellegent person say something along the lines of "We all got our problems" If anything "Everyone has their own problems" would clear it up. But it's the context that makes the grammatical error unacceptable. Prayers should be formal and perfect. So in this poem fix it but in another you may not need to.