Re: First by Dovina	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:34 PM
Was Jerry your first boyfriend...if so...nice...am I on the right track...first thing it made me think of...my first ...crush guy, gave me a Gordie Howe hockey card... :) Bethy
Re: Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:30 PM
your friggin genius !!! Bethy :) :) *10*
Re: My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:22 PM
everybody lies...lol...even princesssssss...but your poem is sweet...good :) Bethy
Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:18 PM
Very Nice...Bethy :)
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:10 PM
Nice brother Sad story Were both crazy.. Thank you Sparky :) Bethy :)
Re: a comment on Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:07 PM
Thank you Sparky...:) :) Bethy
Re: a comment on Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.234	9-Aug-05/12:06 PM
thank you Jon...:) :) Bethy
Re: a comment on My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Aug-05/11:37 AM
Nope. Wrong.
Re: a comment on First by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Aug-05/11:35 AM
No, only a certain girl was Jerry's kid.
Re: a comment on First by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Aug-05/11:35 AM
I don't think either of them fell into any pit blind.
Re: a comment on First by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Aug-05/11:34 AM
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Re: a comment on First by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Aug-05/11:34 AM
Neither Geneses nor Jerry is demeaning to women in my opinion.
Re: a comment on My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX	XOXScottishgrlXOX 64.12.117.5	9-Aug-05/9:14 AM
i forgot to add something. Plus it would have to depend on what the lie was, and the only reason you are like saying this stuff is because i gave you a low vote. I didn't like your poem.
Re: a comment on My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX	XOXScottishgrlXOX 64.12.117.5	9-Aug-05/9:12 AM
Don't you mean discovered since you said had which is past tense!! In the poem it says he never lies, which means that he doesn't.
Re: a comment on More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	9-Aug-05/9:02 AM
In regards to "Everyone has their problems" It may not be grammatically correct but it's still used in common language. Who hasn't heard a reasonably intellegent person say something along the lines of "We all got our problems" If anything "Everyone has their own problems" would clear it up. But it's the context that makes the grammatical error unacceptable. Prayers should be formal and perfect. So in this poem fix it but in another you may not need to.
Re: First by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	9-Aug-05/8:23 AM
Then Juan came along and Adam and Jerry never heard from Eve again. In all seriousness though. Don't you think Genesis is a bit demeaning to women. Someone should rewrite it. It's not like it hasn't been done before.
Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic	daggatolar 196.201.131.153	9-Aug-05/8:22 AM
poetry in spirit, flesh and word
Re: REMEBER by prettyktm	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	9-Aug-05/8:15 AM
Remeber: To meber again.
Re: First by Dovina	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	9-Aug-05/8:10 AM
So we're all Jerry's kids?
Re: First by Dovina	daggatolar 196.201.131.153	9-Aug-05/8:09 AM
and Jerry, after Adam fell into the pit like blind