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Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town (Free verse) by Bethy
I got on my high heeled sneakers
and cheap leather pants
I got a clean shaven face
and $52 and 64 cents
I got a swing in my walk
and a song in my mouth
I got chicklets in my pockets
and I ani,t got no doubts
I got women on my mind
they don,t have to be cute
I got on clean underware
and a polished gold tooth
I got on my best after-shave
and its called Old Spice
It matches my deoderant
and I,m smellin real nice
I got beer in my pick-up
and there,s dorito,s in the dash
all I need now is
a little more cash
I got really good manners
I hope the girls don,t smuck me
I,m ready for lovin
Here comes Mr.Lucky
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 5.327808
Overall Rank: 3497
Posted: August 6, 2005 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2005 11:25 AM PDT
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