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Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town (Free verse) by Bethy
I got on my high heeled sneakers and cheap leather pants I got a clean shaven face and $52 and 64 cents I got a swing in my walk and a song in my mouth I got chicklets in my pockets and I ani,t got no doubts I got women on my mind they don,t have to be cute I got on clean underware and a polished gold tooth I got on my best after-shave and its called Old Spice It matches my deoderant and I,m smellin real nice I got beer in my pick-up and there,s dorito,s in the dash all I need now is a little more cash I got really good manners I hope the girls don,t smuck me I,m ready for lovin Here comes Mr.Lucky

Up the ladder: Coffee or Love
Down the ladder: Polite refusal

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 5.327808
Overall Rank: 3499
Posted: August 6, 2005 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2005 11:25 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 | 8-Aug-05/8:16 AM | Reply
Ha, funny character. Eeek, doritos and old spice
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.234 > T. Jonathron Remp | 9-Aug-05/12:06 PM | Reply
thank you Jon...:) :) Bethy
[9] RGSsparky @ 81.136.193.42 | 8-Aug-05/12:33 PM | Reply
quite amusing. Nicely put
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.234 > RGSsparky | 9-Aug-05/12:07 PM | Reply
Thank you Sparky...:) :) Bethy
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