| Re: Stream of Consciousness (#1) by Enkidu |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
10-Aug-05/8:50 AM |
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Immediately remove your keyboard, shellac it, and donate it to the local museum. Next, buy a new one and finish this novel. Run straight home, Charlie: This. Is. Your. Golden. Ticket.
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| Re: Stream of Consciousness (#2) by MacFrantic |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
10-Aug-05/8:48 AM |
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fallen within the drenched raincoat she finds a penguin cavity filled with desire to run and roam and make pool noodles out of foam
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| Re: Why...? by muffielouise |
7!3 219.93.174.102 |
10-Aug-05/6:10 AM |
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haha i like it.... and i mean the spelling mistakes, too!
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| Re: a comment on Home by Bethy |
Bethy 24.222.32.221 |
10-Aug-05/4:01 AM |
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Thank you Dovina, paw is something that us hillbillies use, lol...and this is a young woman who does not want to go back there...Home... :) Bethy
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| Re: a comment on Home by Bethy |
Bethy 24.222.32.221 |
10-Aug-05/3:57 AM |
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yes , a very young lady who does not want to go back home...
Thank you Sparky :) Bethy
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| Re: a comment on BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm |
prettyktm 203.115.81.186 |
9-Aug-05/10:31 PM |
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HI,THANKS.Sorry for the Big mistake.
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| Re: a comment on REMEBER by prettyktm |
prettyktm 203.115.81.186 |
9-Aug-05/10:06 PM |
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HI,I've try to stop these mistakes.
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| Re: a comment on REMEBER by prettyktm |
prettyktm 203.115.81.186 |
9-Aug-05/10:06 PM |
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| Re: a comment on REMEBER by prettyktm |
prettyktm 203.115.81.186 |
9-Aug-05/10:04 PM |
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HI,I agreed that it is a huge mistake.but as for the doctor and
the penis well,I don't know coz,I am a girl.
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
9-Aug-05/6:54 PM |
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I like the rhythm.
She walked up and down
paw > pa?
The last 2 lines confuse. Maybe you mean "she'd do anything but go back there"
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
9-Aug-05/5:37 PM |
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very descriptive. prostitute, i assume.
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| Re: Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217 |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
9-Aug-05/5:25 PM |
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I actually think this is a great poem. WELL DONE, 10!,
i also commend you for standing up for yourself infront of all these people stabbing at your faith.
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| Re: a comment on Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
9-Aug-05/5:09 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
RGSsparky 81.136.193.42 |
9-Aug-05/5:09 PM |
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Trap some air in it and squeeze!
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| Re: First by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 84.13.16.96 |
9-Aug-05/2:38 PM |
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| Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
Stephen Robins 84.13.16.96 |
9-Aug-05/2:34 PM |
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| Re: a comment on First by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
9-Aug-05/12:44 PM |
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Yep, you're onto me. Don't know where all these other comments come from.
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:43 PM |
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its like playing a record backwards...lol Bethy
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:41 PM |
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awww cool looc wwwa ...OK like my computer is limited to those wonderful little mark thingys...:) Bethy
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| Re: Soft Stuff by RGSsparky |
Bethy 24.222.32.234 |
9-Aug-05/12:37 PM |
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hehehehehehe hahaah heh heh ya ya fun...:) Bethy
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