| Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
1-Dec-05/5:41 AM |
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I think the only gospel written before 70 A.D. was the one Jesus wrote. He posted it once here on Poemranker but everyone made fun of him and called him gay, so he deleted it and quit the site. That's pretty much why all of us here are doomed to an eternal damnation.
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| Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
Caducus 172.214.152.39 |
1-Dec-05/3:15 AM |
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Its very good, focused but i think the meter could be more controlled you do a me three years ago with the odd verbose line.
Imaginative and one of your best.
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
Caducus 172.214.152.39 |
1-Dec-05/3:14 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The copper man and Labrador by Caducus |
Caducus 172.214.152.39 |
1-Dec-05/3:02 AM |
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Spot on - except the dog turned blue from the siren lights
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| Re: On The First Night by OneFingerAnswer |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/10:27 PM |
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Fuck.. I like it.. its sweet.. and I like it -9
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| Re: Send The Devil... by horus8 |
Freethinker1602 129.174.180.3 |
30-Nov-05/9:57 PM |
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Hey there... I was just looking around on here for kicks, haven't been around in ages. Just wanted to say that just because my name is Ke-Ke does not mean I am black. I'm a beautiful blonde with blue eyes.
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| Re: Virtue and Sin by dooley |
Dovina 209.247.222.99 |
30-Nov-05/9:15 PM |
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I presume all the quotes are from the 8-page poem. They seem scattered as shown. But the kicker is "Virtue for women is lower than sin . . .Virtue is a trait few women can see." Do you really mean that?
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| Re: The Bus by Dovina |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/8:57 PM |
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I like the idea.. I get images of molecular hitchhikers riding a comet to earth.. then.. I don't know that I like bred, sped, bled, fed.. and.. in saying, "All the children know the ancient honored bus", are you saying that everyone has their own explanation for why we are here? Anyways, I think the last 3 are the strongest.. -7
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| Re: Virtue and Sin by dooley |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/8:38 PM |
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I'm confused.. there is "I".. and there is the girl.. there is "I" again.. then a writer, low men, a snake, and raccoon.. then back to the girl and another guy, who apparently is a knight.. then back to the damn snake..
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| Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina |
Dovina 209.247.222.94 |
30-Nov-05/8:00 PM |
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I seldom do. They usually think they know.
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| Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina |
Dovina 209.247.222.94 |
30-Nov-05/7:44 PM |
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You have apparently studied this more than I have. I would be interested in a short list of the gospels you think are the oldest and/or the most reliable in terms of authenticity from the first century.
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| Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
30-Nov-05/7:40 PM |
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I have that effect on some people.
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| Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
30-Nov-05/7:36 PM |
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Yes I guess I am bias towards the logical.
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| Re: Low by wilco |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/6:43 PM |
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Do you have any music or chords worked out for this? I put some chords to it.. and it doesnt sound bad.. - 7
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| Re: listen by elderking |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/6:33 PM |
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| Re: Silent Night by Dovina |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
30-Nov-05/3:44 PM |
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I'm not religious or anything but I just don't think turning a christmas carol into a naughty nursery rhyme is all that original. No offense, but it just doesn't seem any more so to me that Sasha's irritating translations.
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| Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
30-Nov-05/3:43 PM |
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And you're saying you're not any of those things?
Someone on here once said I don't have any feelings....that hurt.
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| Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
30-Nov-05/3:39 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Picking Up Sins by BrandonW |
BrandonW 216.78.53.191 |
30-Nov-05/2:35 PM |
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I like the fact that he not unly used cock, but that he referred to it as his "ready cock"... now theres a difference! It was ready for something!
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| Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina |
Dovina 209.247.222.94 |
30-Nov-05/11:36 AM |
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I'm not offended by having the poem called blasphemous. I figured that would come up. If you say I am off-doctrine, I am not offended by that either. What was your point again?
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