Re: One of the guys by hobojo	Dovina 208.127.228.57	1-Nov-08/3:27 PM
This leaves me wondering about several things, and not getting it. Tell me what is wrong with falling in love with a friend, one of the guys or not. Was he really a friend if he did this? What kind of judge of character are you?
Re: Phoenix by Celticai	Dovina 208.127.228.57	1-Nov-08/3:20 PM
Your rebirth is waiting on a lone mountain trail where wanderers like us go to flush the plaque from our arteries and the smoke from our brains. Try it.
Re: WHAT PEOPLE DO by OMOMOMOM	Dovina 208.127.228.57	1-Nov-08/3:17 PM
The first 4 lines open a fine stage to play on. The last 2 lines wrap it up just fine. But whatever falls between needs some major tuning.
Re: a comment on Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.228.57	1-Nov-08/3:13 PM
Intent was always meant!
Re: a comment on With a smile and a light heart... by Nepanthe	Nepanthe 99.239.241.239	29-Oct-08/6:11 PM
Your typemanship has been capsized, please flip over, and dial again. This is a recording.
Re: With a smile and a light heart... by Nepanthe	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:20 PM
PUT THIS IN THE TATE MODERN. WHAT ARE YOU ABOUT? IS THIS POEM A MIDDLE AGED NEW YORK FEM? WHERE DOES IT WANT? IF ANY? NOT FOR ME BUT EXPLAIN CAUSE I CANNIE SEE THE COLOUR[COLOR, FOR YOU IN THE U.S.]
Re: WHAT PEOPLE DO by OMOMOMOM	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:14 PM
typo, so a 9 [is is] OH GO ON THEN 10 I OFTEN MAKEA DA MISTAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.............
Re: Miserable by Miggy	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:11 PM
you made me miserable.
Re: Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:08 PM
Goes on a bit too much for old Sexton here, also contradiction in many many places where intent WAS NOT MEANT!
Re: Inner Peace by chesty82	OMOMOMOM 86.147.172.234	28-Oct-08/1:32 AM
I LIKE IT.MY COMMENT IS A BIT SHORT BUT OH WELL.(AT LEAST I COMMENTED).
Re: SOMETIMES? by Garrett S Sexton	OMOMOMOM 86.139.74.5	27-Oct-08/3:36 PM
I love it, a bit weird but still gr8 BUT there is just one thing its all about cat shit!
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	OMOMOMOM 86.139.74.5	27-Oct-08/3:29 PM
TUT TUT TUT.still 7 though
Re: Beslan by Ranger	amanda_dcosta 82.178.132.117	25-Oct-08/4:13 AM
I think I read this many times and fail to see how I didnt comment on it. Its lovely writing. BTW - I tried mailing you a couple of times on your social network page and your mailing add, but it looks like you dont use them anymore. however , if you get this message, send me a test mail. Anyway, hows everything and what's happening with you.
Re: Childhood Memories by Jessina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.132.117	25-Oct-08/4:06 AM
Hi Jess, good to see you around. What's happening and how have you been ? Good to see your poem here.
Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	New Life Drug 76.126.35.200	19-Oct-08/7:51 PM
P.S. That box will be MINE. What, you thought you were the only person who knew where the Guadalupe River was? San Jose native speaking.
Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	New Life Drug 76.126.35.200	19-Oct-08/7:46 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After 6 long years I have returned to poemranker. God this is awkward...
Re: a comment on definitely/maybe/mobius by malpaso	Dovina 75.82.253.189	19-Oct-08/11:44 AM
Nothing. Good answer to her. Labeling it goes nowhere. And escapism is a good thing, especially when a truck is about to run over you
Re: a clover or two by T. Jonathron Remp	Dovina 75.82.253.189	19-Oct-08/11:39 AM
funny, could make the last 5 words a new line
Re: a comment on Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	Dovina 75.82.253.189	19-Oct-08/11:35 AM
1. Your last poem notched up twice the comments of this one. 2. Straw Man: "the whole point of poemeranker is to achieve the highest comment average in the entire universe." 3. "posting again is a vain endeavour." Conclusion: Your sense for deducing marvelous wonders in the bewilderment of human pursuits is simply outstanding.
Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai	Celticai 123.211.253.133	19-Oct-08/12:47 AM
I'd go with not a good poem personally.