| Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54 |
21-Aug-06/9:52 AM |
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Exquisite. Sublime. Wonderful. I like it.
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| Re: Jeeves Garcia by Crakyamuni |
Crakyamuni 131.252.231.220 |
21-Aug-06/8:55 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Over beast by Crakyamuni |
Crakyamuni 131.252.231.145 |
20-Aug-06/4:36 PM |
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Ok. Can you be my coach. I need a coach. A british coach with big words and an in depth view of the inner workings of Narnia or Harry Potter. Really.
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
Crakyamuni 131.252.231.145 |
20-Aug-06/4:07 PM |
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This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you
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| Re: a comment on Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
rnuk 86.137.229.192 |
20-Aug-06/3:54 PM |
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Apologies for the appalling grammar, terrible northern dialect I have yet to shake.
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| Re: the servers' reaction to gypsies by ~incarnate~ |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:22 AM |
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Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
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| Re: Over beast by Crakyamuni |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:20 AM |
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You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
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| Re: 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:19 AM |
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Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
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| Re: My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:14 AM |
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I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
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| Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove |
MacFrantic 129.82.152.106 |
19-Aug-06/10:47 AM |
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This is one of the funniest things i have ever read, and that a fantastic accomplishment. i can only give you a ten, but i wish i could give you more, if you know what i mean...
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| Re: Visiting My Heart by drnick |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
18-Aug-06/10:04 AM |
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Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
18-Aug-06/9:57 AM |
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Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
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| Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus |
Caducus 86.137.20.84 |
18-Aug-06/6:35 AM |
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how the fuck did this shite turn up on the best list - someone get it down
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| Re: The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:18 PM |
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| Re: Untitled (a draft) by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:13 PM |
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Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
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| Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:11 PM |
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Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
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| Re: a comment on Chickens by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:10 PM |
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That's as clear as mud, then.
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| Re: a comment on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
leonxic 70.248.176.248 |
17-Aug-06/10:27 AM |
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| Re: a comment on To Whemy by dougsoderstrom |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.2 |
17-Aug-06/10:12 AM |
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Dear Dovina,
No..... just thought I'd stop in for a short visit. I'm now placing my stuff at www.lit.org Stop in there and visit with me any time.
The best to you.
Your friend, Doug
P.S. Tell Dark Angel (I think that is his name?) hello for me!
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| Re: Edna's Father's Day Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
17-Aug-06/9:34 AM |
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