| Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:48 AM |
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| Re: The Midget Angel On The Hideous Field Of Death by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:47 AM |
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| Re: All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:47 AM |
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| Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:46 AM |
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| Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:46 AM |
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Jesus farts TWICE for you!
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| Re: Memories Of Home by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:45 AM |
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| Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:45 AM |
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| Re: An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:44 AM |
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| Re: Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:44 AM |
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| Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60 |
23-Aug-06/9:43 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Watcher by creepshow |
creepshow 70.59.81.76 |
22-Aug-06/1:52 PM |
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While some people enjoy writing about flowers and love, and how it inspires them to better themselves, I choose the opposite side, focusing in on all the negative emotions that love can bring, the cruel way it can inflict pain and suffering without regret...that to me is more exiting than depressing, and more heartfelt and real to be melancholy.
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| Re: Watcher by creepshow |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
22-Aug-06/6:52 AM |
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too melancholy and depressing.
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| Re: An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
22-Aug-06/6:51 AM |
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| Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
22-Aug-06/6:49 AM |
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I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
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| Re: Jeeves Garcia by Crakyamuni |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
21-Aug-06/6:31 PM |
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Well, I think you could said it less than half as many words. And to be called a prose poem, it should contain some of the poetic elements, though nobody seems clear on how far this should go. Try rewriting it without the repetition, for starters. Then look for stuff that doesn't really pertain to the story. I think it could become quite good.
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| Re: Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim |
creepshow 70.59.81.76 |
21-Aug-06/6:01 PM |
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Any form of necrophilia is good and pleasant and beautiful..The odors...ah, so noxious it is vibrantly erotic, kissing blue pale lips, cold and hard...anyways, great stuff, but this is just bare bones...You need more MEAT, and substance (potatoes)...my suggestion is this: go into the graveyard at night, and just sit there for a while, inhale the air, poke around, let the dead give you mental stimulation...then come back and tell us all about your exploits about necrophilia...God bless you, 666!
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| Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
creepshow 70.59.81.76 |
21-Aug-06/5:53 PM |
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Finally something with some fucking emotion, and something that screams red colors flashing your eyes grabbing attention to it...beautiful. And how true that there is such pleasant ecstacy in sheer agony...even if it is super cheesy and dirrrty...lol. You rock!
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| Re: a comment on Belong by creepshow |
creepshow 70.59.81.76 |
21-Aug-06/10:57 AM |
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Creepshow...yes, and thanks for the vote. My writings may be dark, but they are true emotional feelings of intensity...coming alive, and hopefully you can experience the feelings being provoked...lol.
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54 |
21-Aug-06/9:55 AM |
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Not at all bad. Well done!
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| Re: Generosity Is A Funny Thing by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54 |
21-Aug-06/9:54 AM |
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Yes I hate those begegrs. Smash 'em in the face if I were brave enough!
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