Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	Dovina 208.127.72.158	13-Dec-06/9:38 PM
ok, you're ahead, but I could have done that!
Re: Lost In It by PoeticXTC	Dovina 208.127.72.158	13-Dec-06/9:38 PM
Way too non-directional and unclear. I think you need definite statements, not wishy-washy expressions.
Re: despaired old age by mystic enoch	Dovina 208.127.72.158	13-Dec-06/9:35 PM
The usual sequence is spring then summer, so I began intrigued by the switch. But then you mention autumn in its traditional old-age meaning, and winter coming, which totally confuses me, because I thought you would say something besides the worn-out aging/seasons thing. "Longing for the next" could be made into a "spring" metaphor, but I find only "eyes cast downward." Clarity seems lost here.
Re: a comment on Bitter by Ranger	Prince of Void 213.207.253.85	13-Dec-06/9:33 AM
I agreed that there is no plot in this poetry ..but it doesnt make no difference I like it as he had tried to show
Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer	Prince of Void 213.207.253.85	13-Dec-06/9:30 AM
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
Re: SNOGGO's Adolescent Adventure in Sidmouth by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 75.35.231.137	13-Dec-06/8:56 AM
Oh snoggo... such an emotional moron. C'mon now, getting paid to shag monroe ain't bad.
Re: a comment on From pains inside by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 213.207.253.93	12-Dec-06/8:32 AM
I'd like to reciprocate ...whenever I try to comment I'm too exhausted due to working lots ..I have lots of poems i havent posted to this site ...but i will try to comment enough for being free from my selfishness ......
Re: a comment on From pains inside by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 213.207.253.93	12-Dec-06/8:26 AM
that's side of my void..............
Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 129.82.152.191	10-Dec-06/11:30 PM
So...318
Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 129.82.152.191	10-Dec-06/11:30 PM
Enkidu (65) D. $ Fontera (63) Deimos (2)
Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/8:20 PM
MacFrantic has 188. Care to say who else you are?
Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 129.82.152.124	10-Dec-06/6:21 PM
By the way, I have 316 poems on this site...and counting.
Re: a comment on untitled by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 129.82.152.124	10-Dec-06/6:19 PM
I'm really just using this site to archive. I read many of the poems, but I don't comment much any more, and I don't care too much if people comment on mine. I'm becoming a better poet through experiencing life, rather than spending all my time on the computer. Be well, and I thank you for the comment.
Re: The blankness of his life by Nicholas Jones	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/5:13 PM
I find it more funny than dark.
Re: Cloche. by howl	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/5:11 PM
No period after "closed." Comma after "fire." Heck with it, all punctuation can go. "Like is done in the dumps" -> "as in the dumps" or somesuch.
Re: From pains inside by Prince of Void	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/5:06 PM
Well, I will say that you do not comment enough. If you want to keep posting these true-to-your-name "void" poems, then go ahead. But when you post without commenting on the other poems, I have to think you are selfish, that you want only to receive, with no inclination to reciprocate. That is truly void.
Re: untitled by MacFrantic	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/4:58 PM
Wow, you write a lot of poems! Are you trying to surpass me in poems posted? Lots of luck there, fella. My fear, however, is that you could be younger, and could win fifty years from now. All right, here’s the bitter ode from a woman’s tongue: You comment too little! Your comments are fewer than comments received, and this is not only bad etiquette, it’s contrary to the ode “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” So, get into the process – dialog, debate, comment. You’ll become a better poet. As for this poem, it’s pretty good. One of you better posts.
Re: a comment on Self Portrait by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/4:41 PM
Yep. A clay model or a painted likeness can’t match the original. It’s only art. But wow, can it ever knock your socks off.
Re: a comment on Self Portrait by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.72.90	10-Dec-06/4:38 PM
Knowing you like to scoot around references to God, and realizing your acceptance for those of us who don’t, I appreciate this comment, and realize further that it probably has little to do with God, but rather with words. Thanks.
Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8	bwaha 152.163.100.6	10-Dec-06/3:32 PM
the randomness with which you decided to make your "I"'s upper or lower case is disconcerting at best, and more irritating than anything else.